Analysis Of What's Wrong With Vocational School

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In the early 1600s, America was given the opportunity of higher education. As decades flew by universities grew and flourished to a point where it’s no longer a struggle to be admitted into a university, and it’s also more accessible to pay for, such as student loans, federal loans, scholarships and grants (Kirszner). Since attending university has become an essential to most high school graduates, universities have welcomed larger classes. A common argumentative debate when it comes to college is whether every American should attend. An example of someone who believes college is only for a handful of individuals is Charles Murray. Murray wrote, “What’s Wrong with Vocational School?” an article published in 2007 for the Wall Street …show more content…

His stance is presented in a clear way to the reader allowing them to understand which side of the argument he has taken. As Murray proceeds to make his argument, he starts it off by jumping to conclusions without any solid evidence. Murray states, “If you are average in math ability, you may struggle with algebra and probably fail a calculus course. If you are average in verbal skills, you often misinterpret complex text and make errors in logic” (Murray 676). This claim is a very broad assumption that may be true for some but Murray’s mistake was concluding that everyone who is average in math will probably fail a calculus course. This statement can leave the reader questioning Murray’s credibility because they have no idea if Murray has proved this, found facts for this or if Murray personally knew every person who was average in math and failed calculus. If Murray had taken time to research this claim, it may be more convincing but there is no source or credibility to this statement, leaving readers questioning if this is Murray’s opinion or a true fact. If Murray had done his research, it would have made his argument more suitable and convincing, instead of being potentially offensive to

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