Analysis Of The Swimmer's Moment By Avison

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The poem, “The Swimmer’s Moment” details that when given the opportunity to take risks, one should take them moderately. In our daily lives, everyone encounters scenarios similar to the whirlpool, or, where they have the option to take a risk and weigh the positives vs. negatives. The whirlpool in itself is a risk, as one could end up in the, “black pit” or, “ominous centre” as a consequence for their actions. For example, they could end up in the figurative, “black pit” filled with consequences of their actions, therefore giving reason as to why before taking a risk, it should be calculated so that they do not end up regretting it. For those who do not take risks, however, they, “will not recognize” and will not get to experience the thrill of …show more content…

For those who dare take such a risk, they could be met with, “an eternal boon of privacy” or the, “silver reaches of the estuary”, possibly signifying a silver lining at the end of the tunnel. With two contrasting outcomes to a singular situation, the author, Avison, continually pushes the fact that these risks are dangerous, which is exactly only why, “one or two have won” this so called game of a whirlpool. Avision also adds that when a risk-taker becomes defeated by the whirlpool, they, “turn away from their defeat” and most likely become the people who sit, “on the rim of suction” afraid to make another mistake or face the consequences of another uncalculated or miscalculated risk. The, “despair” that people feel as a result of a failure is simply a consequence of enduring the whirlpool, with the “death” described signifying the death of their wonder at what is past the whirlpool in the silver estuary. The second stanza serves to Avison as a continuation of first stanza ideals, with the addition of consequences or benefits of the

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