Analysis Of Isiah Fish's Bananas On Fire

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Explication of Isiah Fish’s “Bananas on Fire:
The Virgin’s Guide to Surviving Automatic Heat Death” by Brittney Gruber

The poem “Bananas on Fire: The Virgin’s Guide to Surviving Automatic Heat Death” was written by Isiah Fish and appeared in the 2013 edition of the Zephyrus, Western Kentucky University’s creative writing publication. This poem is incredibly well done with many strengths and only one weakness as far as I can see. It is about the innocence and perversion of youth, the loss of virginity later in life, and even the future beyond. Fish’s writing style and frank diction speak directly to the reader. I believe it is one of the best poems, if not the best one, in the publication.
One of the major strengths of the poem is the stream …show more content…

The Zephyrus is a university publication so the target audience is college students, who are constantly thinking, talking, learning, or hearing about sex. In the seventh stanza, many readers will probably nod or laugh or somehow acknowledge that Fish knows exactly what he’s writing about. This poem will grab a student’s interest with the title—the Virgin’s Guide?—and keep it until the end. Not just because of the subject matter, though. Fish also uses humor that will make the reader smile or laugh out loud, as with the speaker’s anecdotes in the fifth and sixth stanzas. A reader can imagine a five-year-old’s surprise, “Is that a -? No, it’s just a marker,” and will approve of the response to Alexa. Fish has one more up his sleeve with “‘Hey that’s not corn on the cob’” (27) in reference to oral sex. Fish also connects to the audience with his language. In this poem, the speaker uses profanity multiple times. S/he stays at the reader’s level and talks plainly to him or her. I think this is why Fish wrote in free verse. The speaker is straightforward and has no need for any “sing song” quality, or to speak fancily. By speaking plainly and using profanity, the speaker gives the reader an opportunity to understand and connect to the poem. It is also a way to emphasize as in “they say your first time is so important? / That’s bullshit.” …show more content…

I’ve explained that Fish used humor, but he did so through exaggeration and irony. In the first stanza, the speaker uses a hyperbole that the weatherman burst into flame because it was so hot. Later, s/he rants “[third-graders] are out there having full on sex!” (16). Are eight-year-olds actually having sex? Probably not. In the next line, s/he juxtaposes “innocent” and “blowjob” (17), as if blowjobs are in any way innocent. Each of these instances makes the reader pause and think, “Yeah right,” along with a head shake or a laugh. “Cotton- / candy pink panties” (18-19) and “corn on the cob” (27) are examples of alliteration which help the flow of the poem, especially when read aloud. The speaker also ends with a simile and a metaphor suggesting “you’ll feel like you’re / swimming in who you were, and you’ll cautiously dive into who you’re / becoming

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