A Kingdom Forgotten Chapter Summary

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A Kingdom Forgotten by Charles W. McDonald Jr. is not a story for the faint of heart. This book is an incredibly complex and detailed read. It is difficult to describe the plot since the story takes place on many worlds and in different times. There is a large cast of characters involved as well, but the main one is Damon. Damon is ruthless, dangerous, innovative, powerful, intelligent, and god-like. He is the most powerful mage that exists on any of the worlds or times mentioned and he has a mysterious Master Plan. The Master Plan isn't fleshed out for the reader, but it will either lead to Damon's salvation or damnation; the reader gets to follow the steps in Damon's processes of making and executing his Master Plan.

The plot of A Kingdom Forgotten is set on Earth as well as the Earth-like planets of Perion, Kaleion, and Eden. The reader is also launched through time from many years into the past, to the present, and then the far future. There is a group mixed characters thrown together who hail from all times and places. These characters are familiar with different levels of technology and weaponry that includes: axes, swords, bows and arrows, …show more content…

The book is in need of editing and I would like to see certain phrases like “like unto” changed. “Like unto” was used repeatedly for similes when it did not make sense; it would have made more sense to use “like”. There were some subplots that got lost in the time/space jumps as well. There would be several chapters between the jump, from one character to another, that I lost interest in the characters by the time the story returned to them. I had forgotten the name and background of a character from the prologue by the time he was re-introduced to the main story. I think A Kingdom Forgotten could have been better if some of the dropped subplots were left out or if this story was made into two

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