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Valley Forge: Would You Have Quit?

The question of quitting rings loudly in my mind. The year is 1777-1778 at Valley Forge, Pennsylvania in the middle of the deadly winter. Many men are dying because of diseases, the climate, and even starvation. I know what I need to do, nobody said it would be easy, I need to re-enlist. General George Washington is asking all of the men that same question: Would you re-enlist?, and I can’t believe that some of them will not even consider it. Why would you quit when you still have so much to fight for? My country deserves their freedom, and why would I quit when I’m still healthy? After all, George Washington is a great leader, and is an agreeable man, he would fight with us to the very end. …show more content…

They needed healthy men, and I am somewhat healthy, so I just had to do it. I had to talk to others to see what is happening in their point of view, and I also had to see their opinion about these things. I figured that I needed to talk to a man named Dr. Waldo. Since he was a doctor, I asked him what was happening, what he saw. The look on his face was unbearable to stand, anyone who looked at him would be terrified at what he was about to say. He told me that it was a terrifying experience, and that 1,800 to 2,500 men were dying in December-June, he also said that there were many diseases such as smallpox ( when Dr. Waldo was experimenting, I was one of them to be experimented on, and now I’m immune to it), dysentery, typhoid, and pneumonia.(Busch, 147) By then, even I was shaking, I knew that it would be hard, but it was a risk that I was willing to …show more content…

My friend, Thomas Paine, wrote a book called The American Crisis. In the book, it said “The harder the conflict, the more glorious the triumph.”(Paine,153) I want to be there when we gain our freedom back, or at least be known for being there when we would obtain it. I’d rather my family be free without me, than knowing that we might not gain it at all. Just the thought of leaving, knowing that it was not over, knowing that I came here to get the job done. I just cannot leave right now. I get how people want to leave, there is a really high chance of dying, or you could get really sick. But, I’d rather die than knowing that I quit on my family, and my own freedom. “These are the times that try men’s souls” Thomas Paine once wrote. (Paine,153) I’m not going to be tempted to leave when there is still so much more that I need to accomplish. I’m staying here, and that’s my

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