The Whipping Figurative Language

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Life is a game of experiences. From learning how to ride a bike to eating your first slice of delicious pizza, good or bad experiences shape who we are. In “ The Whipping” by Robert Hayden experiences haunt two of three characters. By using diction, figurative language, and point of view Hayden illustrates the effects that our past memories can have in our lives.
There are many words and phrases that contribute to putting together the scene. The author makes it abundantly clear that the women is a villain as he describes her with words like “old”, “crippling fat”. This though is not the complete narrative as by the end of poem the author uses diction such as “purged’ and “avenged” even stating that the whipping was in fact due to “lifelong hidings” which she has lived through. The woman may still be senile, but this empathetic tone is a stark contrast to the earlier shallow insults stated before. This implies that there is an understanding for her ways as a result of past wrongs done to her. If she was whipped as a child it would seem only right to her that she whip future children for their misdeeds. The negative past of the “old women” now directly affects her decision making, and probably has for her entire life. …show more content…

One example of imagery “shouting to the neighborhood her goodness and his wrongs” describes the literal actions of the women whipping the boy, but upon digging deeper it shows an insecurity in the child abuser. The old women does not care about the boy's opinion which is why she is “shouting to the neighborhood”: she wants everybody in the area including herself to believe that the whipping is a result of a boys bad behavior, but the very fact that she is looking for validation makes it clear that deep inside she knows her delivered lashes are a result of her own unsettling

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