Self Assessment Essay: Self-Assessment Commentary

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Self-Assessment Commentary

This self-assessment is to be filled out at the end of GE1401.
The steps in the writing process (planning, drafting, developing, revising, editing, proofreading) we guided you through served the purpose of helping you to create a clear, concise, coherent, and interesting Argumentative Essay. This final product should be the result of adequate planning and exploring, thoughtful structuring of the supporting points, and careful revisions for meaning and format. By following guidelines for citation of sources, you should now be proud of your original work.

It is now time to reflect back on the goals and objectives you laid out for yourself in the Needs Analysis prior to writing your Essay. Please answer the following questions in form of a 750-word commentary: 1. Evaluate your achievement of the goals you had laid out in your needs …show more content…

A. I often use emotive words in the essay. Besides, I often use words repeatedly. For example, I use the word “beneficial” for many times in my essay. These are not good practices. In the future, I will read more academic essay to enrich my vocabulary and develop my academic tone. Also, I will invite more people to help me find the incorrect or unnatural expression.

B. My structure is not clear enough. Although there are topic sentences and conclusions, my structure is messy inside paragraph. Therefore, in next academic essay, I will list my structure of the whole essay and every paragraph before writing the first draft. In addition, I will optimize my structure when I am writing the essay to make the structure of essay fit in the content of essay.

C. During the revision and proofreading of my essay, I also realized that my citation cannot fit in my argument well, which make my citation looks redundant. Hence, in my next essay, I will try my best to search for more information relevant to my

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