Rousseau Holds More Persuasive Than Roseau's

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My personal views coincide with the second excerpt, which praises Locke’s utility at the expense of Rousseau’s over-abstraction. I agree with the author’s analysis that Locke’s theory holds more merit and is more persuasive than Roseau’s. The author of the excerpt makes a compelling argument that Rousseau’s theory is one that looks good on paper; however, it is not applicable to reality. Rousseau’s conception is unrealistic because it is far too idealistic and fails to acknowledge the self-interested aspect of human nature. The excerpt from the essay prompt serves as a strong analysis of the philosophers because it is able to effectively use a personal anecdote to support Locke’s theory that human beings are driven by a want for personal …show more content…

One particular aspect of Rousseau’s theory that the prompt criticizes is Rousseau’s naivety in regards to how human beings act when push comes to shove in reality, rather than in the abstract world of theory. Rousseau’s proposal that man is naturally good and yearns to live in a state of harmony fails to properly acknowledge that by doing so, man is putting himself in a position of uncertainty. This uncertainty lies in regards to whether his peers will act in a same manner or use his inaction to capitalize for their own personal gain. In his text, Rousseau describes the fall of his perceived natural utopian state of mankind as occurring when “The first person enclosed a plot of land, took it into his head to say this is mine” (Rousseau,44). The particular situation that Rousseau describes can be analogized as a prisoner’s dilemma situation. In this situation, all of mankind could default on taking any action for personal gain and all live in harmony; however, the first person who decides to reach out and go against the norm, for personal gain, stands to profit more than those who choose to remain idle. Rousseau’s theory acknowledges this occurrence as a singular event that altered the course of human nature, whereas Locke acknowledges that this uncertainty is persistent amongst human beings in every aspect of their

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