Meet Mark Zuckerberg Summary

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Did you know that almost everything you do on the internet is being tracked and recorded in some way? In the Article, George Orwell… Meet Mark Zuckerberg, by Lori Andrews, Andrews talks about how behavioral advertising, which is the tracking of consumer’s online activities in order to bring custom-made advertisements, is a topic that is concealed to many people and can cause damage. Search engines like Google store the searches you have made and in 2006 there were search logs released which had personal information that people were judged by (Andrews 716-717). Data aggregation is the main way Facebook makes its money. Andrews believes that it’s an invasion of privacy and is not known well enough by the public. This article is aimed at young and new internet users that are ignorant of the possible dangers on the web. Lori Andrews is successful at informing novice users about the dangers of behavioral …show more content…

The evidence she uses is broad and from many sources which makes it an ethical appeal. “Behavioral advertising was used by 85% of ad agencies in 2010” (Andrews 709). This is one example of the many pieces of evidence Andrews used to make her purpose. The evidence is relevant because it is one of the first pieces of evidence used and it introduces the topic well. It is also sufficient because it gives the audience great insight into what is to come. “A Consumer Reports poll found that 61% of Americans are confident that what they do online is private and not shared without their permission…” (Andrews 711). Consumer Report polls along with the other pieces of evidence create an ethical appeal because of the variety of sources. Using a variety of sources is key to an effective argument because this make the author reliable. The evidence used throughout her paper are explained and analyzed effectively to help young internet users understand behavioral advertising and data

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