In the short story, “Eleven”, by Sandra Cisneros, the main character, Rachel, had just turned eleven. Throughout the story, Rachel explains how a person is never one specific age and will demonstrate different age characteristics throughout life. Rachel states that “some days you might say something stupid, and that’s the part of you that’s still ten.” She conveys how age is just a number and a person will never let that part of you go. The author, Sandra Cisneros, uses several literary devices throughout the short story to characterize Rachel.
Sandra Cisneros uses similes to compare how Rachel is feeling and thinking based on a certain situation: “You grow old is kind of like an onion or like the rings inside a tree trunk or like my wooden dolls that fit one inside the other, each year inside the next.” Rachel seems dissatisfied of being eleven based on the comparison the author uses throughout the text. Thus, Rachel never seems happy as the story goes on because she said, “Only it’s too late,”
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The author states multiple descriptive words which allow the audience to imagine what Rachel is thinking of a specific part in the story. The author states that “It’s an sweater with red plastic buttons and a collar and sleeves all stretched out like you can use it for a jump rope. It’s maybe a thousand years old and even if it belonged to me I wouldn’t have said so.” The adjectives used to describe the sweater allows the reader to analyze Rachel’s behavior and thoughts which also shows the author’s use of descriptive diction. Rachel called the sweater “ugly” and “stretched out” which clearly conveys how she disapproves of several things. The author also explains Rachel’s reaction when the sweater was placed on her desk: “I don’t know why but all of a sudden I’m feeling sick inside…,” Rachel’s attitude was demonstrated by the literary device of
Throughout Baby’s life she has experienced many cases where she has lost her innocence. Baby is young enough to bring her dolls around in a vinyl suitcase, yet old enough to experience more than she should about the world’s hardships. Baby and Jules had a lot of misfortunes in their life, and Baby’s vulnerability contributes to her misfortune, in being unable to differentiate between right and wrong, due to her desire to be loved; which Jules always failed to show her. There are many reasons why young adults feel the need to grow up fast in the adulthood world but in the end it’s not worth it. The childhood stage is overlooked and that’s the most important stage of life that young adults should cherish, because you only live through it once.
Of course, Rachel being 11 years old, she does not have a broad mindset which is the cause of her simplistic phrases that include repetition that help reflect her true age. “Not mine, not mine, not mine” repeating that the “ugly sweater” was not hers but clearly not being understood, Rachel must repeat this phrase -only in her head- just like any child would when not being listened to. Not only does this phrase inform the reader of Rachel’s weakness to stand up for herself but also of how she is accustomed to not being listened which has her thinking that she must repeat herself. Finding comfort in not only burying her face but in the thought of “mama's cake” and “everybody singing happy birthday”, she demonstrates that she feels smaller physically and emotionally so she continues this saying in her head to get her through her moment of the “sick feeling”. After constant wishing of being “102”, or “invisible” Rachel finally decides that it is too late for “mamas cake, “candles, presents and everybody will sing happy birthday” because she no longer feels “ten, and nine, and eight, and seven, and six, and five, and four, and three, and two, one” she no longer needs closure of her
Much of the imagery described within this piece stems from the mind of Rachel. Specifically, when Rachel is handed the sweatshirt, she believes it “smells like cottage cheese” (Cisneros 17). The smell that she describes portrays her in a childlike manner because of the simplicity behind her description. The lack of maturity is also noted when she finally touches her unwanted sweatshirt that is “itchy and full of germs” (Cisneros 17). The way in which the sweatshirt is described creates an idea in the reader’s head of the sweatshirt while also getting a picture of Rachel’s opinion. The lack of depth into her description of the sweatshirt exhibits a lack of understanding for the situation by
...ltimately makes the young girl feel that she will break underneath all the pressure she is placed upon by her peers. Inevitably it seems that Judith Ortiz Cofer used similes in order to connect both the act of maturing to a much more somber factor which have reinforced the tenor of the poem.
In life we go through very hard times that’s just how life circles, but do these problems really help shape your spirit to who you are today and who you will be one day in the future? In the book Copper Sun by Sharon Draper Amari overcomes some of the most complicated problems in the history of the U.S., in which I personally don’t think I would have been able to handle as swiftly and fast as Amari had. With the help of others Amari was able to create a strong backbone to carry her thought out the way and support her in her worst times. Although some of these influences weren’t always the best people such as Clay, he helped shape Amaris future and the theme of the story. Finally, how important where the minor characters on helping to shape the main character’s spirit and inner mind, and after that transaction how where they able to slowly develop the theme/message of the book?
Similes in the story gives the readers insight of not only the fifth-grader but the adult too. “By the time school started that year, Eddy had a keloid like a piece of twine down the side of his face and a black patch he had to wear until he got his glass eye that stared in a fixed angle at the sky,” (Line 56-59). This quote has a simile, which shows how the fifth-grader feels about her cousin Eddy. The simile allows the readers to make a prediction that the fifth-grader and Eddy get along pretty well because the narrator never describes him as scary, mean, or distant. The simile effects the narrator’s characterization because it make the fifth-grader seem gentle and excited to be around people. The character is given characterization through similes. Similes are a key component to characterization because it allows readers to understand the narrator and character in the story. Figurative language is used throughout the story to characterize the adult narrator's memories in the
It brings out the complexity and frustration of this character symbolizing how this sweater that is "ugly with red plastic buttons and a collar and sleeves all stretched out like you could use it for a jump rope" has become Rachel's lifelong battle. It's a battle that lasted for 11 years and how she builds up as a stronger person as she grows up but is still hesitant to stand up and act as the eleven year old she really is and confidently tell the teacher that the sweater is most definitely not hers. Rachel compares growing old as "kind of like an onoion or like the rings inside a tree trunk or like my wooden dolls that fit inside one another". Her confidence rattles like "pennies in a tin Band-Aid Box" showing how she is always on the edge of bursting into tears and feeling sad about who and what she is. Another comparison to when Rachel describes the sweater as "smelling like cottage cheese" it not only compares the sweater to "cottage cheese" but also her
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The imagery really helps in believing this is an eleven year old telling the story. This voice doesn't feel like a grown-up essayist putting his or her words in an eleven year-old storyteller's mouth, and these pictures develop a world originating from a kid's perspective. All devices that are used in this short story really do help the reader relate to Rachel. Cisneros does a very good job in showing relation to any age group to whatever the reader is. It really does feel as if the reader is the one in the place of writing this instead of reading it. This short story is real enough to make the reader believe that it is their own words and that is exactly what Cisneros is trying to do so that she could show the emotional experience that everyone
In “Eleven”, written by Sandra Cisneros, Cisneros uses literary techniques such as diction and imagery to characterize Rachel’s character during her transition from age ten to age 11. These literary techniques help to describe how Rachel feels in certain situations while also explaining her qualities and traits. Through the use of these literary techniques Cisneros also collaborated on Rachel’s feelings when she was other ages and how she felt at that time during her life.
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Sandra Cisneros writes a memoir through the eyes of an eleven year old. Turning eleven happens to be a tragic day for the main character, Rachel. Through various literary techniques such as hyperbole, simile, and syntax, Rachel is characterized. Rachel is a fresh turning eleven year old who finds herself in an awful situation on her birthday. Forced to wear a raggedy old sweater that doesn’t belong to her, she makes it defiantly clear her feelings towards the clothing item, and we see this through use of hyperboles. Rachel describes the sweater as ugly and too “stretched out like you could use it for a jump rope.” This extreme exaggeration demonstrates the fire within Rachel. She is a defiant and pouty little girl who out of stubbornness has to defy the sweater in her mind. “It’s maybe a thousand years old”, she says to herself in act to degrade the filthy red sweater even more. The sweater to Rachel has become an eternal battle of ages. She is torn on whether or not to stand up and act bigger th...