Doodle's Death Analysis

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I believe that the narrator is responsible for Doodle’s death, but Doodle is also guilty of his own death too. I believe that the narrator is responsible for Doodle’s death because he taught his brother to walk. This may have been a benevolent matter to do at the time, but it played a big role in doodles death. He did not directly cause the death, but it was indirectly caused by the course of events that followed it. Doodle could have prevented his own death. Doodle is responsible for his death, but not as much as his brother. Doodle over exerted himself before his death. If Doodle had said no to his brother, his death could have been prevented. Lastly, the narrator is guilty of leaving Doodle behind in a rainstorm while he was tired and scared. …show more content…

One might think that when Doodle was five his brother teaching him to walk was a fair surprise. Doodle’s brother saw it this way, and I see it this way as well. The narrator was not trying to kill his brother by teaching him to walk, but this is what caused Doodle’s death. Doodle’s brother was well aware of Doodle’s preexisting heart condition. The doctor said that using his legs too much would cause him to overexert his heart, and in doodles death, walking was the main reason he died. While teaching Doodle to walk, Doodle’s brother was often careless. For example, when the narrator taught Doodle to walk, Doodle would often fall to the ground and land on his chest. The ground was swampy and covered in twigs and rocks as well. Doodle was using a part of his body that he had never used before. Although teaching someone to be independent is a kind act, in Doodle’s case, how he taught him was not the safest. Doodle’s brother was well aware of Doodle’s heart condition as I said earlier. Even though Doodle’s brother knew this information, and after the doctor said that physical exercise was not an approved option, Doodle’s brother still taught Doodle to walk. That is why I believe that Doodle’s brother is guilty of teaching Doodle to walk, when he should have never done …show more content…

Doodle’s brother left him lying in the road scared and afraid. Running down the road Doodle fell because of a tree being blown to bits in front of him. Doodle’s brother hadn’t run far when he got tired and stopped and waited for him. Doodle’s brother ran away from Doodle when he fell, and left his brother to catch up. Doodle was over exerted by then and could not make it to the narrator. Doodle’s brother ran as fast as he could and left a big wall of rain between them. The narrator left his brother out of earshot and did not check on him for a long time. As he waited for Doodle, Doodle was dying under a tree at the side of the road. If Doodle’s brother had not pushed doodle so hard doodle could be alive. This is still no way to treat any six year old. Making a six year old row up a river in a boat with not only his and the boat's weight, but also a person that was double his age. By the time the narrator found Doodle, Doodle was covered in a cruel layer of red blood. Doodles face was colorless except for the damp red blood on his curvy chin. Doodle’s brother went over to him and said let’s go. When doodle did not respond, he lifted his dead brothers head to reveal the blank expression upon his empty

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