Dbq Essay On What Would You Quit At Valley Forge

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At Valley Forge, December 1777- June 1778. Washington and his Continental army would be staying here for 6 months and it was a very difficult place to live because it was very cold, a lot people are sick, and low on supplies but some are leaving and others are staying. Would you have quit Valley Forge? I would have stayed at Valley Forge because only 15% of people are dying, there is help on the way, and because of the inspirational words of Thomas Paine. I would not quit because only 15% of people are dying. My first piece of evidence that supports this claim is from document A and it shows 3,989/8,000 soldiers are sick, but only 1,800/12,000 died which is only 15%. Even though half the population is sick, only 15% people are dying, which is not a huge amount of people are dying. This evidence supports my claim because it is telling you how many people died. My second piece of evidence that supports this claim is from document A and the numbers show that not a lot of people are leaving. On document A there is a graph …show more content…

My first piece of evidence that supports this claim comes from a quote on document D it says “The more harder, the conflict the more glorious the triumph.” This quote means its gonna be worth it to keep on fighting because the bigger the conflict the bigger the reward, and in this case the colonist are fighting for freedom. My second piece of evidence is another quote from document D. ”If being bound in that matter, is not slavery, then is there not a thing as slavery upon earth.’’Thomas Paine is saying what the British is doing to them like taxing them, living in their houses, and treating them rudely, is not slavery then there is not such a thing as slavery that exists on earth. Would I have quit at Valley Forge? I would stay at Valley Forge because only 15% of people are dying of illness, there is help on the way, and the inspirational words of Thomas

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