Analysis Of River Plan Too Fishy For My Taste Buds

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The topic the essay is mainly talking about is whether to initiate the San Joaquin River Project. I am with Bill McEwen on his article, “River Plan Too Fishy for my Taste Buds.” I chose this author because I do not think the government should spend more money on the river rights project. The author convinced me that he is more credible and can be trusted by all the experience he has. The article was published in Fresno Bee on March 26,2009 and is surrounded by farms so the people there know what will happen if big businesses were to start a project. McEwen demonstrates how this project will impact the city in a negative way by stating ethos, logos, and pathos. The author demonstrates Pathos to prove to the reader he understands them and cares …show more content…

Logos means the persuading by the use of reasoning. For example, “ No one even knows whether salmon can even survive in the lower San Joaquin, which has temperatures more suitable for bass and bluegill, (McEwen 1).” The quote is clearly a display of logos because the author demonstrates to the reader that the government does not even make sure the salmon can survive in the lower San Joaquin, which then convinces the reader the project is not well thought out and cannot be trusted. I agree with the author’s viewpoint because if the government was really interested in the benefits for people, the representatives would have looked into all the details necessary to be able to succeed with the project. Another example of the author stating logos on his article for the reader to get a better understanding of what the government really cares for is, “Besides, scientific evidence suggests that California’s salmon problems have been caused in large part by oceanic conditions and the environmental mess that is the San Joaquin-Sacramento Delta (McEwen 1).” This quote is an alternative representation of logos since it proves a fact. The fact makes the reader extra believable since he uses scientific evidence about California’s salmon problems. It is clear to me the position that is superior to the other one because there have been numerous studies proving this project will …show more content…

On the day of April 18, 2015, Fish and Wildlife Service and California Department of Fish and Wildlife released 54,000 hatchery juvenile spring-run Chinook salmon into the San Joaquin River. A failure is that dry year conditions will likely impact the number of returning fish. The five year drought really had an impact on the project since the salmon is in critical conditions for survival to adulthood and to support the goal of the Restoration Program to restore the salmon. The updated cost of the entire restoration increased from $1 billion to $1.5 billion, which includes $300 million for levee work that the state would address. If El Nino comes to California it will only benefit us. I have not changed opinion after I researched further into the project. My viewpoint stayed the same as before since the project was not really successful for the reason of the drought not helping the

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