The hardest part of revising this essay was the global changes, having to go through and pull for a stronger agreement. “A Friend in Satan” is by no means a work of art, comparable to cake; it was the one that hid in the corner trying to avoid being detected. I didn’t look at this essay for content purposes after the second draft. Reading through, my argument was properly thought out, with partial sentences and confusing phrases. After reading Kate Brennan’s “Floating” again, I was able to draw from new paragraphs that supported my original thesis. In the original paper I did not highlight that there were three instances in which the husband rejected his wife, and Satan appeared. I was also able to expound on the idea that the floating woman was gazing upon herse...
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...pent a majority of the course looking up the proper uses of a comma, yet I still have not mastered the rules. From the first draft of “A Friend in Satan” to the final draft, there is a dramatic change in sentence structure and pauses.
Overall I have learned that drafting is not the difficult part of writing, but revising is where all the magic happens. The wisdom to begin broad with ideas and content, then narrow down to sentence structure and mechanics was tough to grasp at first. Yet through practice and a conscious effort, my writing has taken on a new personality. I am more comfortable having others read my work and criticize my ideas now than I have ever been. A wider diversity of an audience helped the essay become narrow and succinct. This cut the drafting process down tremendously and also allowed for more time to correct the mechanics of my writing.
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