Persuasive Essay On Campus Education

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Americans has always been on the edge of the next creative wave. However, presently and in the future, America is being challenged. Due to outsourcing and the World Wide Web, countries around the world are able to compete with America like never before. As Thomas Friedman puts it in his book The World is Flat, “Flattened? I rolled that word around in my head for a while and then, in the chemical way that these things happen it just popped out: My God, he’s telling me the world is flat!” (Friedman p. 7). Friedman suggests in order for Americans to complete in a flat world, we must upgrade the education of every American. Technological advances have made it possible for higher education to be competed through eLearning. eLearning is admired …show more content…

This is especially a desirable option for students in the Yakima Valley because a large percent of our student population are working class students, juggling a full time job and children. However even if eLearning is more affordable and accessible, it should not replace on campus education in the Yakima Valley because it will not help teach students to learn how to learn, nor help with the ambition gap and will not contribute to closing the education gap at the top. With access to the World Wide Web and being able to “google it” learning how to learn should be a piece of cake. Friedman comments about the Internet, “The result is that the same generation is in danger of growing up with 170 terabytes of knowledge and information, but not more than a few bits of wisdom” (Friedman p. 312). In other words, information is confused as wisdom and people do not know how to decipher between the two. I agree and believe this constitutes that eLearning students aren’t learning how to learn even with this cloud of …show more content…

We neglect the fact that we are competing globally and aspirations are necessary. Friedman words this reality well, “If one puts his ear to the flat Earth, one can hear the competition overseas” (Friedman p. 357). In making this comment, Friedman reminds us of the importance to not lose our ambitions because those in other countries are hard at work and the competition is fierce. I agree that Americans should be worried and should strive for higher education but then the question arises, can eLearning close this gap? The education portal points out that, “students who struggle to force themselves to complete unpleasant tasks or assignments may not have the motivation to complete an online education program. There’s no one to hold them accountable for deadlines or lectures and students may find it harder to get work done win this environment” (Education portal). In other words, motivation can be lost if there isn’t anyone physically around to keep one from falling behind. This theory is correct because studies have shown that students were more likely to fail or withdraw from online courses than from face to face courses (Jenkins). The documentary Discounted Dreams mentions that community colleges attract low income and academically underprepared students. A study on Washington State community

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