An Out Of Body Experience - Original Writing

An Out Of Body Experience - Original Writing

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The screeching of tyres, the blast of the hooter, the glare of the
headlights, then pain; searing through my body, then I felt as if I
was flying through the air, until I fell. Smack! My head hit the kerb.
Then everything went black. I couldn't move, speak or feel ant pain. I
could hear a woman's voice screaming hysterically at a man who I
assumed to be her husband. The man shouted at her to phone for an
ambulance. Then I could hear him, close to my side, squeezing my hand,
apologising and begging me to stay with him, telling me over and over
again that an ambulance was on it's way. I heard sirens wailing away
in the distance, getting gradually closer.

The rest was a blur. I felt nothing. It was just as if I was asleep. I
now know that I was rushed to hospital by ambulance, where I was
rushed into casualty where a life - support and a blood transfusion
was set up. Soon I was on the operating table.
The next part I remember as clearly as anything. As I lay there, I
felt myself being drawn out of my body. I remember thinking to myself;
"Good God! That's me down there on that table! Look at all that
blood!" Looking down I could see two nurses squeezing packets of
blood, which were hanging up on drip stands as fast as they could into
my body. Everyone was rushing around bringing in packets of blood. All
these wires trailing from my body.

I started to rise closer to the ceiling. There was a glow of light
around the ceiling. I started to go through the ceiling. I wasn't
frightened, I was curious though as to why and how I was departing
from my body and rising up through the ceiling. Was I dreaming? I soon
came to a bright shaft of light. It was the most brilliant, purist
white light I'd ever seen! It was blinding white. I was going ever

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closer to the source of this light. It was like floating down a torch
beam towards the bulb only much brighter. I could see a man standing
at the end of this tunnel. He had a sort of glow around him. His robes
were of the same colour as the light. He called out my name and
gestured me to go to him. He told me he wanted to show me something.
We started to walk together, although I could feel no solid ground
beneath my feet. As we walked, there was silence. There were so many
questions I wanted to ask but I couldn't find the words. Soon we came
to a gate. It swung open. What lay before me took my breath away, for
I'd never seen such beauty! There were rolling hills in the distance,
covered in beautiful, luscious green grass. Gently sloping green
fields. Beautiful flowers, perfectly made, bright colours, species I'd
never seen before! There was a river and it was crystal clear with
gravel on the bottom. The sky was so blue and clear. A man walked
towards me wearing white robes. As he came closer, I could see it was
my colleague, PC Mark Collins, this can't be right, I thought, he died
last year in a fire. He greeted my warmly, held me by the shoulders
smiled. "Here, there is no pain and suffering, only eternal life." It
dawned on me that I wasn't dreaming. I must've died and gone to
heaven! The man whom I'd first met held his hand out to me. In the
palm of his hand was a recently healed wound. I knew now that I was
with Jesus. Having never been a religious person I was always rather
sceptical as to whether I believed in life after death or not. "You
can stay if you like." I was told.

A sudden pain hit me through my chest, again and again. I could hear
distant voices, "we're losing her!" "Charging 400 joules! Everyone
stand clear!" Bang! The pain hit me again! I looked back towards the
tunnel I'd come from. I could see my colleague, whom I'd been on
patrol with that day, sitting with my Husband in the relative's room.
I could see my husband, clutching our daughter close to him, both were
crying. He rocked backwards and forwards. My colleague sat with his
head in his hands. To see my family so inconsolable, I wanted to go
back for their sake, but when I looked around at the beauty before me,
I wanted to stay. It must've been written all over my face. "Now that
you have seen me and believe in me, I can guarantee you a place in
God's kingdom, for when the time is right, you will return and join me
on that day in paradise." His words stuck in my mind, an everlasting
echo; I will never forget them. I started to walk back to the tunnel.
I started walking down the tunnel, until I was flying down and down
faster and faster until I burst back through the ceiling and being
drawn back into my body.

My life has completely changed now. I realised how I'd taken my family
for granted and dedicated my whole life to my work. I'm still
committed to my work, although I devote all my spare time to my
husband and daughter. I've since got promotion. I'm now a Detective
Sergeant. I'm no longer afraid of death. Throughout my whole
experience I didn't once fell any pain or fear. It's an experience
I'll never forget, so long as I live.
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