Persuasive Essay - Original Writing

Persuasive Essay - Original Writing

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Wee woo, wee woo, bang, bang, swoosh. For an average citizen living in Gary, Indiana these were the sounds of the night. I was eleven years old and one of these citizens. I was used to police flying past my house, people trying to rob you on every corner, and my neighbors thinking that they owned “the hood”. This was life and I didn’t realize how bad I actually had it until my mom decided enough was enough and we moved to a quiet town in Florida.
In our U-Haul truck sat my stepdad, Rob, and I with all our household items in the back. In the SUV sat my mother, nine year old brother, my baby sister, and my two dogs. I just knew from the beginning that this trip was going to be crazy due to the fact of having a screaming baby, two barking dogs, and a little boy that has to pee every fifth teen minutes. That’s why a chose to sit in the U-Haul with Rob then have to deal with my family squished into one car ready to kill each other.
While thinking about the family trying to destroy each other in the other vehicle I found a strange hatred for my parents. They had taken me away from my frie...

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