Analysis Of Forest Bathing

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Essay 1 “We’ve always known that spending time in nature is good for us, but now we have real evidence that spending time in the forest, specifically, can create measurable changes in our bodies and minds that have a significant effect on out health”. As introduced by Story in the aforementioned quote, this is the subject of what will come to be known as Forest-Bathing. Colleen M. Story is a “northwest-based writer, editor, and ghostwriter… and specializes in the health and wellness field. Coleen is the founder or Writing and Wellness”. On July 2nd, 2014, and article by Colleen Story titled “Want to Prevent Cancer? Take a Walk in the Forest- Studies on ‘Forest Bathing’” was published on the Renegade Health blog. Her work is meant to provide …show more content…

Story, who has been writing for well over a decade, does very well connecting with her audience; being a very experienced writer not only in wellness, but also in general writing. She has very evidently done her research on the subject, and this article deserves to be utilized as an introductory source into the benefits of Forest Bathing. Story also keeps a clear connection with the writer by often telling them what to do in order to start Forest Bathing on their own. For instance “To try forest bathing for yourself, find the nearest natural area with trees, and follow these tips: Try to stay at least an hour in the forest surroundings… For everyday maintenance, a daily walk in a park near your home can also be helpful… etc.” …show more content…

in any field, and could possibly attribute to some misinformation about the subject and even her not knowing as much about the subject as she leads on. Also, in a critical turning point in the article, Forest Bathing, or otherwise known as “shrinrin-yoku” is misspelled as “shinrin-yoki” the only time that Story uses the term in the entire entry. This, while possibly being clerical error, gives some question to Story’s credibility and her reliability. While quite plausibly just being a simple mistake, as the “I” and the “U” are right next to each other on the keyboard, also leads to the question if Story proofread her own article. While these questions are raised, they can be easily dismissed. As Story has been writing for over seventeen years in many genre’s, it is safe to assume that she has established credibility and can be trusted. This can be exhibited through her articles and through her wellness website. As for the misspelling of “shinrin-yoku”, it seems as though it was a simple stroke of the wrong key, as the two letters that make the difference are right next to each other on the

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