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...ience had to take into account how nervous Malala would have been to present her speech. These few errors in her speech were most defiantly outshined by her incredible speech. Malala’s speech could have been improved if Malala talked about her experience following her attack. Malala talks about her experiences and how they are the same for thousands of girls all around the world, but she really doesn’t explain them. Malala was able to use her words to make the audience sympathize with these thousands of girls. If she spent more time talking about herself as well, the audience would only have more sympathy towards her cause. A more in depth discussion of how the attack drove her to continue to advocate for education would have only further improved her speech. Malala’s story of courage and strength will be called upon by presenters of speeches for years to come.
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