In my English 100 class I have learned to stay focus on my thesis and to always make a connection to another book, myself, or something that has happened in the world. My learning outcome for this class was to have different organizational patterns of writing that the audience/reader is able to understand. This semester has been a challenge, with this specific class because, in my writing I have to learn how to incorporate the academic language, so I didn’t only have the choice to improve my writing for my class, but myself in my future English classes also. In my writing I am still learning to explain what I mean by using a specific amount of details, so the amount of practice in class was very helpful.
The one specific area that I have improved in so much is my thesis or my reason for writing. This one specific area has helped my writing get better because, in the beginning my writing was all over the place, now it’s a step by step essay that anyone can understand. I would say that this was the most I improved on because when I received my first essay, on the back it was a big question at the bottom, “What Are You Talking About?”, and as a writer in a business major that’s something I would never want to hear or read. The feedback that I got, I was very ashamed and I began to do some work on my own with my thesis by reading, writing, and doing research. My writing has improved so much from then to now. I can create a purpose even before I start to write, then I decide if I agree or disagree with the article, find reasons why, and add details that relate to the article. Now I can start to finish the beginning of a successful writing career.
The area of my writing where I still need some improvement is the amount of detail I p...
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... know that academically my habit will have to change for the better like doing my work as soon as I get it instead of procrastinating most of the time. My behavior and priorities have changed this semester because, I’ve said a lot of things that consists of this class is more important that this class, which now I understand that all are important and they each should have the same time to study, do homework etc. My behavior will be different in the future because I will do more than just my work; I will grow to challenge myself as an academic scholar to be more successful in my classes. The impact this will have on my personal life will be to grow, and allow my brain to grow. This impact will allow my life to be how I always dreamed of living the successful like of an entrepreneur and right now today, nothing but my academics will determine if I get there, or not.