Adoption Persuasive Essay

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Thesis: The lack of adoption of older children within the foster care system stems from adopter’s personal concerns and the adoptees psychological issues. However, encouraging parents to adopt older youth is a positive effect because it will stimulate stability and decrease behavioral and mental problems within the child’s life.
I. Abstract of adoption and foster care.
“legal procedure recognized by statute in every state of the U.S. that permits, by means of a court action, a person who is not the lawful issue of the adopter to be admitted to all rights and privileges of a son or daughter” (Issues & Controversies).
“The first well-known foster family care program in the United States was The Placing Out System of the New York Children 's Aid …show more content…

Children are placed in foster care because they have either known hurtful misuse or abandonment which drove them to their assignment. This type of “placement” more often than not splits them from their “siblings, friends, and community” (Conradi 208).
II. Problem: Older children are not being adopted and are stuck in the foster care system.
“Approximately 30,000 to 40,000 youth leave the foster care system each year with no permanent, stable family to support them as they negotiate the challenges of early adulthood” (Diehl 81).
According to the most recent “Adoption and Foster Care Analysis and Reporting System” from 2013, 269,833 children between the ages of 4-18, considered of older youth to adoptees, lived in foster care system. The highest amount of children at a given age was 16 or 17. This totaled to be 53, 990, and came to be about 20% of the children residing in this lifestyle. (AFCARS Report #21 1).
“Children were considered placed at an older age if they were placed at 4 years or older; 49% of children fell in this range” (Waterman …show more content…

He is in this predicament due to his mother’s lack of parenting and stability for his life. Michael is surrounded by substances, gangs, and fights from his home town, Hurt Village. It wasn’t until a family saw him on the street took him in and later adopted him, that the stability of having a family not only erased the behavioral influences around him, but exponentially more success than he could have otherwise (The Blind

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