Analysis Of Ronald Takaki's The Harmful Myth Of Asian Superiority

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We’ve all heard it said that Asian Americans are good at math; anything involving science, technology, and medicine. They study all the time, work really hard, and live a version of the American dream many of us never thought to dream of. And of course, we know these stereotypes are dangerous and often untrue, but perhaps we still find ourselves buying into them. Ronald Takaki”, the ethnic studies expert, writes about the idea that Asian Americans are more successful than any other American minority group in his article “The Harmful Myth of Asian Superiority. Takaki refutes this idea by strategically, and somewhat effectively, using reason, statistics, and word choice to show that Asian Americans still face some of the same hardships and barriers …show more content…

Takaki states that “Hmong and Mien refugees from Laos have unemployment rates that reach as high as 80 percent” (p.118). This statistic is shocking: 80 percent! Imagine you were coming to the U.S. in a group of 200 people, and after two years 80% (160) of those 200 people were unemployed. That 's a lot of people who may not have been well supported for two years. Now imagine you came to the U.S. in a group of 50 people, and 80% (40) of those people did not have a job after 2 months in the U.S. It 's not as big of a deal as the 160 people who did not have a job after two years is it? While using this statistic Takaki doesn 't tell us how many people were in this group or how long they had been in the U.S. when the survey was taken. In this paragraph (10) Takaki also tells us that “three out of ten Southeast Asian refugee families had been on welfare for four to ten years”. However, Takaki does not provide us with enough context to evaluate this statistic. Takaki does not tell us how long it typically takes refugee families to settle in and find a job they can do despite the possible language barrier and inherent prejudice in the U.S. He doesn’t even tell us how long an American family is typically on welfare. As readers, we have nothing to compare those four to ten years with. As the readers ,we do not know if either of these statistics are significant or trivial, but …show more content…

As seen in some of the examples above the words Takaki chooses to use in his article both strengthen and weaken his argument against the idea of the model minority. By using vague terms, Takaki allows his audience to imagine how vast the differences between the idea of Asian superiority and actual Asian American success are. This strategy is effective in paragraph ten, where Takaki tells his readers that 80 percent of Hmong and Mien refugees have been unemployed and our minds scramble to make sense of this large number. But it does not work in paragraph seven where Takaki states that “while thousands of Vietnamese American young people attend universities, others are on the streets...some of them join gangs” (p.118). The vagueness of this statement makes it applicable to just about any people group Takaki’s readers could think of. The argument could be made that Takaki chose this vague point in order to create a connection between Vietnamese Americans and other ethnic groups. If this was Takaki’s purpose, then it was too ambiguous to be effective. With a simple phrase (i.e. “Like all other groups”) Takaki could have explicitly connected Vietnamese Americans and “all groups” in this

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