Graduation Speech : Writing An Essay

Graduation Speech : Writing An Essay

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On a typical hot day, the twenty-eight of August was the first day of the fall 2016 semester. I was excited to attend my English Composition I and meet my instructor. I was able to write an essay without any struggle as I learned before in the English language Institute of Akron university. However, writing an academic essay needs a lot of practice, knowledge and that what I needed in order to improve my writing skills. As an ELI student I was able to write a formal essay with fundamental requirements but without sense of creativity. I started to learn new ways of writing essays, used my imagination and developed creative new methods to attract the reader 's attention. There are many aspects to write college level essays that I was not aware of until I took the English Composition I with Mr. Sarvis. For instance, "Show, Don’t Tell," which made me discover my buried talent, Entering the conversation using outer sources as references and place my thesis statement in the right part of the essay.
As a college student, I had to rise my writing skills and take it to the next level which is the academic level. Even though I am able to write a formal essay without any skill of descriptive writing, but later on with some efforts in this class I managed to learn how to write a descriptive writing essay to deliver ideas and thoughts to my readers. When I took "Show, Don’t Tell," with Mr. Sarvis class, he taught me how to get in the mood of making my reader see through my eyes and imagine the story that I am writing. The way of making my essay reader feel my emotions and my experience throughout a journey of descriptive scenes instead of reporting the scenes directly in a boring way.
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...queness and lacked of academic writing experience. However, my writing skills improved since I started taking this class and every class I noticed a progress in my writing skills. As a result of taking lessons of "Show, Don’t Tell" I became more descriptive in my writing and expressed my emotions the way that will touch the reader heart. Also, I learned how to enter the conversation with outer sources which made my writing more academic in responding to other writers. Thus, my essays now are more solid and academic because of entering the conversation and expressing my opinion in the thesis statement. In addation, I learned how to write the thesis statement and how it is important for the essay reader. I learned a lot through this class and I can assert that my writing skills before were totally different from the moment I took English Composition I in this semester.

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