UC Berkeley Argument Essay

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What does it take to become a student at UC Berkeley? Marcela Alvarez must be admitted to UC Berkeley because of her exceptional grades and her dedication to her extra curricular activities. The amount of freshmen that applied to UC Berkeley in 2015 is 78,918 applicants and in 2016 there was 82,573 freshman applicants. Out of the 78,918 freshman applicants that applied only 13,321 (about 17%) in 2015 were accepted. In 2016 only 14,433 (17.5%) were accepted. As the results concluded, every year there are more and more freshman applicants and still only about 17% of applicants get accepted to UC Berkeley. Therefore, Marcela Alvarez needs to be admitted to UC Berkeley because of her persistence and passion to her grades and her extra-curricular …show more content…

At the same time, Marcela maintains persistent grades. Marcela has been engage in cross country, and track and field. As she runs her way to all her medals, she also has the big heart to give back to her community, by participating in the Christian Youth Service League volunteer. At school, Marcela takes a part in the speech and debate club and the yearbook, which in 11th grade she was the treasurer for speech and debate and at the same time the staffer for yearbook, and in 12th grade she was the president for speech and debate, which she was also the layout editor for yearbook. According to UC Berkeley, “Becoming a Golden Bear requires more than a test score. To “be Berkeley” requires persistence. And passion. And a desire to give back.” (UC Berkeley). Does ACT and SAT scores matter? Or does it take persistence, passion, and a desire to give back? Do ACT and SAT scores really matter? In Sarah Sheffer’s Article Do ACT and SAT scores really matter? New study say they shouldn't, Former Dean of Admissions William Hiss says, “‘...GPA matters the most’’’ (Sheffer). While Marcela Alvarez has low SAT scores, she has an exceptionally high GPA. SAT and ACT scores are just a snapshot, while her grades are an overview of how she does in class. Marcela Alvarez does have what it takes to become a student at UC

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