The Design of Imperfection

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The universe itself is a combination of different patterns of designs sewn together by an invisible thread. Though the existence of a higher God may be debatable, the true design of life, with all of its perfections and mutations, still remains a mystery to this day. Robert Frost, in his poem “In White” and its rewrite, “Design,” challenges the idea of whether or not God designs the imperfections of life. It is arguable to decide which poem is the better of the two, but when compared, “Design” is better because the imagery expressed is able to shock and horrify the audience more than the original version.
The imagery used in “Design” to depict the spider arouses stronger feelings from readers than the imagery used in “In White.” At first, the spider is described as “dented” (White, 1), but Frost changes this description into “dimpled” (Design, 1) and “fat and white” (Design, 1). Although this change in detail may seem peculiar, the new description causes readers to be more horrified than before. The reasoning is because Frost wants readers to think that the new description of the spider is, in a sense, “cute” while the original description is simply “irregular.” Readers are less horrified when an object that is seemingly “imperfect,” kills, and are more shocked when an object that is shown as “cute,” slaughters. The audience is biased and judges objects first on appearance, rather than actions. Readers assume that something that is described as “cute” is harmless, but Frost contradicts this idea by showing how the spider mercilessly catches the moth and violently sucks the juices out of it. The irony of a cute spider killing an innocent moth is horrifying, and Frost beautifully depicts this more in his rewrite than in his origina...

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...criptions of the flower, spider, and moth lets the audience experience more vivid imagery. This odd image of a white spider eating a white moth on a white, diseased flower arouses stronger feelings to come from the readers. The use of imagery is important, and in “Design,” Frost changes the details, language, and diction of the original poem in order to push readers to think about a stunning question: Does God design the details of the smaller things in life? The answer is debatable, and through vivid imagery, Frost puts readers in a position of thought. He wants the audience to question the design of life and by rewriting his original poem and making it better, Frost leads readers to another more in-depth question: If God does indeed design the smaller things in life, then does He also design the mutations and imperfections of the world, as shown with the heal-all?

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