The Best Bite: The Stories of Army Hempel and Annie Beattie

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The Best Bite: The Stories of Amy Hempel and Anne Beattie An amuse-bouche is an hors d'oeuvre served to shock the taste buds. Chefs are meticulous in their choice of ingredients for an amuse-bouche, as this one bite proclaims who they are and what they create. The bite must be just right. The writing of Amy Hempel and Anne Beattie is a lot like an amuse-bouche. Their opening sentences are immediately engaging, a unique and deliberate diction allows for maximum intensity in a limited space, and their stories are about the moment, rather than a prolonged succession of cause and effect events. An examination of the following six stories, “In the Cemetery When Al Jolson is Buried,” “Nashville Gone to Ashes,” “Jesus is Waiting,” “A Platonic Relationship,” “Home to Marie,” and “Find and Replace,” prove Beattie and Hempel’s concentrated works are demonstrative in the art of restraint. What takes an entire paragraph for some writers to covey is a clipped sentence for Hempel or Beattie. Each word is necessary and saturated with meaning, thus eliminating the need for excess. And no sentence is as important as the first. The initial sentence must incite intrigue and contain insight to the contents of the story. It is the foundation upon which the entire work is built. In an interview with the Paris Review, Amy Hempel compares writing short fiction with journalism, stating that, “you have to grab readers instantly and keep them.” She refers to “In the Cemetery Where Al Jolson is Buried,” remarking “The opener contains the whole story: ‘Tell me things I won’t mind forgetting’” (Hempel, 39). The story centers on two women, one terminally ill, the other a visitor to her sick friend. In order to divert attention from the true reason for t... ... middle of paper ... ...shachari, Neila C. . "Ann Beatie - Interview." PICTURING ANN BEATTIE: A DIALOGUE. Version Volume 7.1. N.p., n.d. Web. 30 May 2012. . Trouard, Dawn. Conversations with Ann Beattie. Jackson: University Press of Mississippi, 2007. Print. Wagner, Erica. "'The Collected Stories of Amy Hempel' - New York Times." The New York Times - Breaking News, World News & Multimedia. The New York Times, 21 May 2006. Web. 30 May 2012. . Winner, Paul . "Paris Review - The Art of Fiction No. 176, Amy Hempel." Paris Review – Writers, Quotes, Biography, Interviews, Artists. Version No. 166. The Paris Review, n.d. Web. 30 May 2012. .

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