Squeaky Raymonds Run

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“Inhale confidence, exhale doubt,” Jennifer Collins once said (www.lifecoach-directory.org.uk). This quote perfectly describes Hazel Elizabeth Deborah Parker, who is also known as Squeaky, the main character of “Raymond’s Run” by Toni Cade Bambara. Throughout the story, Squeaky has to deal with the responsibility of taking care of Raymond, her brother, minding her mother, who wants her to “act like a girl for a change”, and the pressure of the upcoming May Day races. Squeaky has to win the race for herself to prove that she is still the fastest kid in her neighborhood. The story is centered around the race because she may have competition. Although her life comes across as stressful and sad, she powers through it with full confidence, bravery, …show more content…

Squeaky narrates and uses interior monologue to describe her sad life. At the beginning of the story, she starts thinking about her mentally challenged brother, Raymond, and how she gets into a lot of fights because people bully him. Since Squeaky gets into a lot of fights, it is sometimes clear that she is either going to win or lose the battle, depending on the situation. She manages to use her bravery to her advantage as she turns situations around when she is the underdog. Squeaky’s bravery is crystal clear in the following quote: “I much rather just knock down and take my chances even if I am a skinny girl with skinny arms and a squeaky voice, which is how I got the name Squeaky” (p. 26, lines 18-19). Instead of being an under confident person and taking in the bully’s nonsense, she portrays her bravery in full blast. She does not like to listen to the bully talk all day, and she would much rather take her chances by fighting. The fact that she describes herself as a skinny girl with skinny arms may suggest that she is not as strong as the bully. So, taking her chances is the smarter thing to do because if the bully is talking, then she may be able to take the bully by surprise and gain a small advantage despite her size. This adds a new layer to her personality besides her love for running and her confidence: courage. This quote perfectly portrays her courage throughout the story--how …show more content…

Even though most people under Squeaky’s circumstances would come across as under confident because of the amount of bullies she has to deal with, Squeaky wears her confidence like armor throughout the whole story. Her confidence is portrayed through narration, dialogue and interior monologue. As the author introduces Squeaky to the reader, she is thinking about how she gets into a lot of fights. She says “if things get to rough” for her, she runs. Then, she describes how fast she is. Squeaky’s confidence shines in the following quote: “And as anybody can tell you, I’m the fastest thing on two feet” (p. 26, lines 22-23). Squeaky probably is not literally the fastest two-legged thing. She is probably really fast, faster than an average human being if she used that hyperbole. Her speed is very important because Squeaky gets into fights a lot. So, in case she is really disadvantaged or outnumbered badly, she can run. In fact, even she narrates that she runs if it looks like the bully will win over her. If she is so fast, she can outrun the bully easily. Also, throughout the story, Squeaky describes how running is the most important thing to her. Not only does Squeaky inhale confidence throughout the whole story, her speed proves to be handy in a number of

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