Review of the Panic Room

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Review of the Panic Room

The deep and persuading voice of the salesman seemed to help Jade make

her decision whether to buy the mansion or not. The salesman, smartly

dressed, walked across the third floor landing to the main feature of

the house, the panic room.

"This is the panic room, designed to enable you or the victims of a

robbery or unlikely house invasion of some kind, to go into and stay

safe. The steel door is12 inches thick, impossible to break into with

any sort of tools. The panic room has state of the art electronic

surveillance of the house, a separate telephone wire so the victims

can call the police even if the main house telephone wires were to be

cut. Also there is a huge cooler, which has drinks and a small amount

of food and for all possible safety a fire blanket."

This room stunned Jade and her twelve-year-old daughter Sarah, who was

unfortunately diabetic, and this room seemed to have clinched the

deal. They made their way around the 4-story house once more to secure

their decision and the house seemed to fulfil all their possible

needs. Jade went over to the salesman and took a deep breath and said

proudly, "We'll take it!" The salesman was delighted and went to fetch

the paper work.

By the end of the following week, Jade and Sarah were fully packed and

ready to abandon their old pigsty. Regrettably it wasn't all tears of

joy for Sarah. She had to leave her childhood memories and friends

behind and start a whole new life. Although she was disheartened she

still had a place in her heart for the excitement and thrill of her

new house. The two sat in the removal lorry and waved goodbye to their

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door and said, "Wait a minute, you don't live here, I came along this

morning and saw the new people, and the mother is single called Jade."

The policeman let himself in and cried out, "Hello, is anyone there,

Jade?" Jade saw the officer in the house and she remembered him from

the morning. She looked at the surveillance and could see that he had

tied the boss up so she let herself out the room and ran quickly

towards him. She was relieved and told everything to the officer. The

three men were taken in for questioning and later arrested. The hidden

five million dollars still remains hidden beneath the layers of

carpet, waiting to be found!

Unfortunately Jade and Sarah could not keep the house after this

traumatic experience and went to look for a smaller house which was

simpler and suited all of their needs.

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