Review Of Jannali's 'Tales Of Tears'

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Tales of Tears
Georgia McGillivray

The red soil crumbled against the burnt and raw feet of the aboriginals. A small, lurking group of aboriginals waited in the night for the governor’s appearance. Peering through the trees, Jannali one of the youngest and strongest of the tribe stood with determination and courage, gripping her spear tighter and tighter as the seconds went by.

Jannali’s partner who she was soon to wed, stood in front of her, putting his hand on her shoulder and whispered into her ear, “We will get through this, together” Jannali looked up at Baringah his big brown eyes made her heart flutter uncontrollably loosing her focus she whished that they could live happily.

The rocks on the ground started to tremble.
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The thick billow of surging smoke crawled into the night sky. “Come out you filthy black creatures” the governor bellowed. Jannali leaped out from the tree onto to solider, who was standing next to the governor. She stabbed the him straight through his chest. As the blood dripped from the body Jannali’s face was infused with fury. Her spear swung around and hit George Arthur in the head. He flew backwoods.

The solders scrambled firing guns and aiming their spears, the mud soon became red. Jannali looked over at Baringah he was covered in blood sweat and mud. He had wounds all through his arms. Amongst the screams Jannali looked to find Aasta, ensuring she was still standing. Jannali’s heart felt like it had leaped to her throat. Jannali turned and saw Aasta being drag away by two solders. Fighting for her life, Aasta struggled but could not break free. Jannali screamed in frustration. She drew her spear up and swung the body around, taking two other soldiers out at once. Jannali kicked one of the soldiers that was dragging Aasta. The other solider grabbed his gun. Aasta shook him out of his stance. He …show more content…

She felt the pain as if a hundred blades were sinking into her stomach. Moaning and screaming, she writhed on the ground, grasping her body. Baringah stood over her. Shielding Jannali from the whites. She new she had to get out of there. She started to crawl. Hopeless getting know where, she grabs Baringah hand letting him know she’s still alive. A loud gunshot was fired. Jannali’s hand started to shake. Her heart sank, she screamed with agene and dred. Baringah was splashed in his own blood and was slightly trembling. Yet he still held on to his spear urgently as though it was his hope for survival. The essence of death is overpowering. She watched her partner gasping for air. Jannali screamed. It seemed that the entire world was watching him eagerly as he looked around unsteady. His eyelids slide over his eyes and his body fell to the

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