Reread Prayer Before Birth

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Reread Prayer Before Birth Reread Prayer Before Birth. Explore how the poet conveys the modern world as brutal and a corrupting force. In prayer before birth, Louis Macneice uses a baby to convey his thoughts and emotions on the current state of the world. Macneice wishes to emphasize how harsh and ruthless the world is, and how it can strip away a young unborn baby of its innocence. By cleverly combining uses of structure, rhyme scheme and rhetorical techniques Macneice effectively conveys the pain and suffering which occurs in society today. The poem is set out like an appeal, a cry for help. The title itself, using the word prayer shows that the baby is trying to get help for something which troubles him- which raises a question; why would a soon-to-be born fetus that has its whole life strewn in front of it be despairing? Shouldn´t it be preparing to enjoy that experience? The first line reveals what the fetus is afraid of: ¡hear me. Let not the bloodsucking bat or the rat of the stoat or the club-footed ghoul come near me The use of hear me and Let not seem to be a demand, emphasizing the fetus prayers- it is pleading to be protected from the threats of the bat, rat, stoat and ghoul. These creatures don´t seem to be meant in literal form- creatures such as these do not pose a major threat to today´s children. Rather, they seem to be used figuratively, as these creatures are associated with disease. They are also frequently the subject of children´s nightmares. The use of club-footed ghoul especially is a strong use of imagery, as the word ghoul implies a diseased, flesh-eating and dismembered monster. Also, the internal rhyme used by rat, bat and stoat emphasizes these dangers- they b... ... middle of paper ... ...cneice has made them to be the most important factors which the fetus needs to be protected against. However, the structure may run deeper than that. The poem seemingly resembles the fetus speech: His prayer of protection gradually increases in confidence as the stanzas become longer, but stumbles somewhat during those shorter lines. It shows how the fetus is devoted to his cause and quest against the brutality of the world. Thus we can see that Macneice conveys the brutality and corruption of the world through several methods, but most importantly through an unborn baby. Macneice wants us to think about the world- he has systematically listed some of the events and things that are bad with the world. Macneice wants us to ask ourselves this striking question: If we cannot guarantee the safety and well-being of our next generation, should we kill them?

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