Analysis Of To All The Girls I 'Ve Rejected' By Jennifer Britz

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“To All the Girls I've Rejected” by Jennifer Britz addresses the issue of girls being discriminated against in college admissions. The purpose of the article is to bring light to the problem, its causes, and serve to as an apology to the girls that Britz has denied because of discrimination. Britz establishes her credibility by being a college admissions officer who also has a daughter that struggles with the disappointment of receiving college rejection letters. The emotional appeal of the article comes from the heartbreak, struggle, and the relatable sting that the girls feel when they are rejected. Statistics and research are used throughout to further validate the claims that the author makes about the gender difference in college and …show more content…

As the Dean, she is the head of her department and she has to work with the male applicant favoritism issue on a daily basis. Being the Dean of Admissions makes her both knowledgeable and trustworthy when writing about the issue. The fact that she is also the mother of a girl affected by admissions discrimination makes her even more of a credible source of information. She has first hand experience in both situations and has the ability to see both sides. Being on both sides of the issue, the author seems less biased toward either side and therefore more …show more content…

She confirms that the college she works at is affected by gender discrimination with the data stating, “more than 55 percent of our applicants are female” (Britz). The facts in the article that tell the most about the college gender gap are, “ two-thirds of colleges and universities report that they get more female than male applicants” and “ more than 56 percent of undergraduates nationwide are women” (Britz). This evidence reinforces the claim the author makes earlier in the article, that the overflow of women in colleges makes it harder for them to get accepted. The statistics in this article provide logical proof to appeal to the

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