Reflection Paper

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Over the course of this class I feel like I have become a much better writer. When I go back and look at some of my Journal entries and assignments that I did at the beginning of the semester, I can’t help but tense up at some of the things I wrote. Sometimes the things I was writing didn’t flow well, or I might have even have missed glaring grammar mistakes. In “Assignment 1” we were given nine different topics to write about. However, all of the topics had one central theme, Reflection. For my essay I chose to focus on the fifth topic, which asked us to “Write about an incident when you felt alienated from your family, peers, or social group. Focus on a key scene or scenes that show what happened, why it was important, and how it affects …show more content…

The goal of this assignment was for us to read a article, paraphrase it, and then create a response to it. I chose to write my summary on the article “ The Fall of the Female Protagonist in Kids’ Movies” by Stefan Babich.
The biggest strength of this assignment is without a doubt the structuring of my paper. I summarized Babich’s article in the order that it was presented in, and did it in a way that was easy to digest. A strong example of this in my response, in the first paragraph on page four I list several instances in the article where Babich proposes that there aren’t enough female protagonists in Pixar movies. Then in the very next paragraph I make a good argument that goes against his claims.
As a whole I feel like the paper shows my ability to take a opinion piece that I didn’t write, think about it critically, and then formulate a response to it that not only disagrees but brings my own ideas and evidence to the table. I do this by mentioning several strong female leads in Pixar films such as Dory and Jesse, then go on to present evidence from a study that suggests that Pixar isn’t intentionally excluding female characters from leading roles like Babich believes and go on to say “I think he’s overthinking Pixar’s …show more content…

In my final copy my citations were riddled with mistakes, and Professor Wilkinson made me fix them and then resubmit it. I’m really glad that she did that because if she hadn’t I would 've never have learned how to cite the proper way. In the final clean copy of this draft you can see that I cited all of my sources correctly. This was also the first time I had to use in text citations, I messed up a little on the formatting of them, but I corrected it for future assignments. You can see that in “Assignment 3” I used in text citations

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