When assessing my current writing ability, I recognize my ability to efficiently relay a message; however, I struggle with using strong phrases and advanced writing. When I begin drafting a paper, translating my thoughts and ideas into words comes naturally, and I do not get lost in the process. As mentioned previously, the general areas that need improvement include using strong vocabulary to convey a professional level of writing. Also, I believe that I need to work on transition phrases between ideas.
1A – Specific areas for improvement
I have a few specific problem areas for improving my writing. For instance, I struggle with condensing my ideas and message. Because I fear cutting out portions will detract from my goal or message. Another
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One of these goals would be to research examples of effective writing demonstrating the ways to connect with my audience. This strategy will improve my writing dramatically. Another way to achieve my goals is to attend a session with the Mays Communication Lab or University Writing Center. They have available resources needed to create an effective message within my writing. With their tips and techniques, I will be able to edit my work and strengthen my writing skills. I also plan to proofread my documents every time I write something. Sending my writing to someone else to make sure that it flows and has a clear message will also be …show more content…
I hope to be at a point where I speak with confidence, clarity, and organization. By May 2017, my goal is to incorporate a structured way to organize my thoughts into an effective speech. I want to be able to speak about ideas in a way that will connect to the audience and impact them. My goal is to walk into any public speaking situation without any kind of reservations or fears.
3 – How will I get there?
There are a few ways that I will reach my goals for May 2017. With constant practice of public speaking in the MS Business program, I will refine my public speaking skills and assist myself in overcoming fear. Along with practicing, I will record and watch myself present; so that I may see areas of improvement this way. With the use of my peers, I will be able to receive feedback on how they perceive my public speaking. They will not only will they be able to constructively critique my presentation skills but also help me organize my thoughts.
FINAL THOUGHTS
Overall, I have a lot of areas of improvement when it comes to writing and public speaking. I hope that by the time I graduate, I will be able to accomplish my goals of becoming a more effective writer and speaker. With all of the resources that are available to me, I should have no problem reaching these goals. By the end of the program, I will convey my message effectively through writing and
I am more knowledgeable about invention, arrangement, style, and delivery, all in which create a masterful piece of text. A few examples, I have learned to organize and construct my thoughts and ideas clearer. I have been taught to use stronger transitions and focus more on the delivery and content of the body element of essays. Further, the instructions and advice I have received throughout this term have influenced my understanding of the purpose of writing. My outlook on writing has been modified by shifting my perception of writing from, writing to prove I am a good writer by perceiving it as using “fluffy” or BIG words to impress my audience. I grew to understanding that good writing’s purpose is to engage the writer by mind-striking ideas and arguments, which therefore will prove and title me as a “good writer”.
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Every time when I have to do a writing assignment I have to go through the similar experience. If I have to make a list with all of my writing problems, the number one will be “Articles” For an ESL student, it is really difficult to understand when and what article should be used. Thus, articles “a” and “the” look tricky for me. Another problem for me is prepositions. Many times I am using “about” instead of “for”, and it does not make sense for me why “wishing for a new bike” is correct and “wishing about a new bike” is wrong. Using the correct verb tense is another issue for me. A lot of times I use simple verb tenses, and I am struggling with perfect verb tenses. Punctuation also causes problems for me in my writing process, especially
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What do you want to get from giving the presentation? (your
b. Carfully organize your message, arange your speech ion a way that is clear and relavant. Meaningful, Making sure what you are speaking about matters to you and your audience. a. Consider the setting, always take into account the setting where the speech is going to be held. This can give you a better understanding of the audience and what information you should provide. b. Avoid information overload, make sure your speech does not give the audience to much to handle.
The following action plan will demonstrate how I plan to improve my presentation and communication
Moving on, Some of my strengths in this informative speech I believe were speaking in a proper tone of voice, having lots of information about the topic, and finally making the speech interesting to hear. However they are some things I need to work on such as being on proper time, better sources and also trying to be more relax when I present so I don’t breeze through my speech. With some more work and making a little adjustment. I know that I could give a better and more informative speech that people would and love and be interested about.
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