Poem Analysis: To Get To Sourdough Mountain

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To get to Sourdough Mountain Lookout, you hike a good five miles and gain 5000 feet or more of elevation. The terrain is rugged and the hiking strenuous, but that’s to be expected in the Northern Cascades. Located 130 miles northeast of Seattle, Washington, the Forest Service opened one of its first lookouts here in 1915. The view from the lookout station, constructed by the Civilian Conservation Corps in 1933, is a postcard in every direction: Mount Prophet and Hozomeen looking north, Jack Mountain out east, Pyramid and Colonial Peaks to the south with Ross and Diablo lakes directly below, and, as if not to be outdone, the Picket Range is off to the west. This is impressive country and you can understand why it’s been an inspiration to poets Almost I want to say “Mid-August at Sourdough Mountain Lookout” is a kind of haiku-sonnet, with an imagistic opening stanza followed by a “turn” in the second stanza -- a turn to the “I,” whereas before the “I,” if not the “eye,” was absent. Here is the poem in its entirety: Down valley a smoke haze Three days heat, after five days rain Pitch glows on the fir-cones Across rocks and meadows Swarms of new flies. I cannot remember things I once read A few friends, but they are in cities. Drinking cold snow-water from a tin cup Looking down for miles Through high still The reason is unclear. Snyder eventually obtains an unsatisfactory explanation from the Department of Agriculture, claiming his “general unsuitability” for the job. It appears Snyder may have been blacklisted – or red-listed – for his union sympathies (his grandfather was an IWW “Wobbly” and Snyder himself joined the far-left Marine Cooks and Stewards Union when he was eighteen). “I am forced to admit that no one thing gives me such unalloyed pleasure as simply being in the mountains,” Snyder wrote to Whalen at the time. “My rucksack and boots hang accusingly on the wall.” Consequently, he ended up working in a logging camp in eastern Oregon that summer and worked on a trail crew in Yosemite during the summer of ’55, after finishing up his graduate studies in East Asian Languages at UC Berkeley. In May 1956, Snyder left for Kyoto aboard a freighter to study Zen Buddhism and climb the Japanese mountains. Once in Japan, where he lived off and on for the next ten years, Snyder met a group of Yamabushi, so-called Mountain Buddhists, who taught him how walking the landscape can be both ritual and meditation. Snyder later told an interviewer for The New Yorker, “They said, ‘O.K., we’re going to see if you are one of us.’ They told me to climb up a five-hundred-foot vertical rock pitch while chanting the Heart Sutra. Luckily, I knew the Heart Sutra, so that was

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