Persuasive Essay: The Problems With Paying College Athletes

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College sports have become more popular throughout the past few years and the NCAA is doing an immense amount of money. This increase in money has caused colleges to become involved in this global debate over whether college athletes should be paid or not. Many athletes believe they should be paid for all their hard work, time, and dedication to the organization. Other people like, Kristi Dosh, believe that college athletes shouldn’t be paid because there are too many questions that haven’t been answered for them to join the opposing side. A lot of questions come up with this debate, like which athletes are going to get paid? Kristi Dosh is an author and an ESPN sports business reporter. Dosh wrote the essay, “The Problems with Paying College Athletes”, on June 9, 2011. This essay was published in Forbes which is a business magazine about sports and money. Kristi Dosh makes a somewhat convincing argument by asking a lot of questions to get her audience to realize how difficult this change is, however; she doesn’t do a very good job giving any citations or statistics to back up her statements. Ultimately, I think Dosh is convincing to her audience, but the weaknesses outweigh the strengths. Dosh published her article in Forbes, “with its wide editorial lens and iconic status in the lexicon of American media, Forbes is not just a …show more content…

Without even getting into whether college athletes should be paid, I just don’t see a scenario where college athletes can be paid without allowing the gap to grow between the haves and the have-nots. (Dosh 578) Her essay organization helps to reach her target audience, which is athletic directors, the NCAA, and anyone who is affected by this debate. She reaches her audience by opening with a neutral stance on the argument in the beginning, asking questions and giving solutions, then concluding with her view based on what she has

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