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Persuasive Essay: Should Cellphones Be Allowed In School?

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Writing is one of my favorite things to do in my life. I love it when my awesome teacher gives us a writing assignment. Also, that time I feel so happy because there are thousands of ways to write essays but whatever teacher give us a different way to write essays. In my class, we write differently than another class. First thing we do in class is discussing about other people who wrote essay before with the same topic. Our teacher read aloud in class before, we read by ourself, and annotate every paragraph and write the main idea about the paragraph. Next, we do pre-writing like brainstorming, clustering, focused free-write, summary of TedTalk, vocabulary Log, notes paraphrases and connection for two of the articles also clarify and evaluate …show more content…

In this essay, the author

  • Explains that writing is one of their favorite things to do in their life. they love it when their awesome teacher gives them a writing assignment.
  • Explains that in this class, we wrote more than 3 essays, but i should choose 3 of them, which i get a nice score and discuss about.
  • Opines that people who are bilingual have a better ability to think because they can think in two languages that help them with career.
  • Opines that cell phones should be allowed in schools because they increase safety, build on the learning process and school management. we need to save ourselves from old teaching ways and embrace the new technology.
  • Concludes that they feel like they have accomplished a great idea about writing essays. after all the hours of writing, and putting effort into the papers, they will become better writers.

Throughout this essay, I wrote about cell phones should be allowed in school because they increase the safety, build on the learning process and school management. There are so many benefits to having this technology in school. The school day will become more enjoyable if we could incorporate cell phones into the lessons. We need to save ourselves from the old teaching ways and embrace the new technology that is out there and given to us. It is time to move forward instead of backward. So, let us all start it with one step forward first, which is by allowing cell phones in …show more content…

As the final essay comes, I find myself where is my weakness, and strength but also what I have learned. The most important thing I have learned so far is how to write a better essay. Somehow after all the hours of writing, and putting effort into the papers that I wrote this semester I will become a better writer. I did this because I concentrated on two very important areas with the attitude of if I could just become better in those. I would become a better writer to help from an awesome teacher and a friend who help me, I will become a better writer by improving my skills in the areas of grammar, verbs, and run-on

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