Persuasive Essay On Multiple Concussions
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Within the past couple of decades, a huge has been opened against the NFL. Thanks to the research of Dr. Omalu we have found that the rate of concussions in the NFL is higher than that of any sport, and it leads to serious, long-term problems. For example, CTE. The NFL has somewhat acknowledged that this is the case, but this doesn’t stop them from hiding it. And now players are beginning to hide their concussions. Progression is concussion awareness, prevention, and proper medical treatment is not looking good. Chronic Traumatic Encephalopathy (CTE), is a brain condition found in most NFL players. According to the Brain Injury Research Institute, “It is a progressive degenerative disease which afflicts the brain of people who have suffered repeated concussions and traumatic brain injuries, such as athletes who take part in contact sports, members of the military and others”. Unfortunately, we cannot diagnose people with CTE until they are deceased. In 2002 Omalu made a huge discovery that cause an uproar in the NFL community. He diagnosed retired player, Mike Webster with CTE. Many more followed Webster, most committed suicide. When Omalu presented his …show more content…
In this essay, the author
- Explains that the nfl's rate of concussions is higher than any other sport, and it leads to serious, long-term problems.
- Explains chronic traumatic encephalopathy (cte) is a progressive degenerative disease that affects the brain of people who have suffered repeated concussions and traumatic brain injuries.
- Opines that the nfl and its players need to take concussions seriously because they focus too much on money rather than people's health.
- Explains that many people in the nfl still don't see the connection between concussions and cte and realise that football players are at a high risk of getting it.
Recently, Calvin Johnson and Drew Brees admitted to hiding concussions, and Tom Brady’s wife spoke up about her husband hiding concussions as well (Steele). The not only affects the player by causing more head trauma, but it also affects the football community by promoting bad habits. Youth football players look up to these men and will think that it’s ok to hide a concussion. This is a serious problem. Concussions must follow a strict recovery system. Also players run the risk of second impact syndrome, which causes death. The NFL and its players need to do a better job at taking concussions seriously. They’re focusing too much on money rather than people’s
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In this essay, the author
- Explains that the national football league has been associated with concussions and brain traumas throughout the years, but recently it was exposed by media and nfl veterans. many former players are experiencing the effects of taking hard hits over and over again.
- Analyzes how the nfl started a committee called the mtbi (mild traumatic brain injury) in 1994. dr. elliot pellman's quote shows how concussions didn't hold much importance, even though it should have been the committee’s main focus.
- Narrates how mike webster, a former pittsburgh steeler, brought awareness to brain traumas by claiming to be disabled with the nfl retirement board and having dementia.
- Explains that dr. omalu diagnosed a football player with cte, and two other doctors connected concussions to dementia.
- Explains that the mtbi was still making concussions sound minor, and not a big problem.
- Describes how david duerson, a 50-year-old former chicago bears player, committed suicide to donate his brain to further research.
- Explains that duerson is not the only player dealing with effects of brain trauma during a professional football career. over 240 complaints have been filed against the nfl and how they deal with concussions.
- Explains that the nfl ignored mounting evidence about damage from concussions and tried to dispute emerging science with questionable research of its own.
- Explains that the league finally strengthened their approach to concussions. medical professionals on the sideline now are more prone to look for symptoms.
- Explains that concussions can be fatal if they occur before the brain heals properly. many nfl players are giant and feel untouchable, but they need to be as aware as everyone else.
- Opines that the first few days after a concussion, an athlete needs to be very careful with what they allow themselves to do.
- Explains that concussion prevention techniques can be used especially in football. helmets are the protective gear to help with prevention.
- Explains that football is a very physical game and the chance of preventing any injury is very limited. all doctors agree that helmets will never completely prevent the brain.
- Describes the recent rule changes that were an effect of the settlement, including hitting with the crown, the snapper can never be hit, and late hits.
- Argues that officials should be responsible for removing players suspected of concussions. they argue that if officials are trusted with this power, they should also be able to remove players who are bleeding.
- Opines that the issue of concussions spreads beyond the players alone. many rules and procedures have been manipulated to fit new research on brain traumas.
- Explains that the nfl announces rule changes. the nfl concussion litigation rss.
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- Opines that football is a violent game, and the high-profile suicides of former players junior seau and dave duerson, as well as the murder/suicide of jovan belcher, have put the nfl's fame and glory at risk.
- Analyzes how the suicides of dave duerson and junior seau opened up many people’s eyes to the effects of pro football on human beings.
- Explains that while cte and brain damage can cause depression and dementia, it is not the only cause. there are many factors that contribute to the high rates of depression in former players.
- Explains that the examination of the issue of brain trauma and concussions and mental illness in professional football players will follow a medical model of sociology.
- Explains the strain theory, which asserts that there are social structural conditions which lead to mental illness. the average salary of a professional football player is 1.9 million dollars annually.
- Explains that the average career of an nfl player is only 3.3 years, and that anomie, or rapid change in social standing, can lead to "anomic suicide."
- Explains that the stress theory examines the effects of stress and stressors on the individual. there are only 1,700 jobs in the nfl at a given time.
- Explains that the physical stress that nfl players are under is incredible. the constant stress on the body can lead to chronic pain, which is proven to cause depression.
- Analyzes the sociological theory of mental illness in professional football players. the labeling theory states that people who are labeled mentally ill will assume the role of a mentally-ill person.
- Explains that sociological theories can help examine the reasons for depression and mental illness in former professional football players, but labeling and stigma seem to be the biggest problems in getting treatment for these men.
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- Argues that nfl players should be informed about the dangers of brain injury from helmet makers and should receive medical care for past, current and future players.
- Explains that football is a violent sport and that there is concern over the risks posed by hits that injure the head and potentially the brain. liberals are big supporters of the respect for human dignity.
- Explains that dr. elliot pellnan, the chairman of the nfl's mild traumatic brain injury committee, portrayed concussions as minor injuries. roger goddell issued a press release in 2009.
- Explains timothy birdnow's claim that destroying the nfl is "the lefts end-game". he blamed the liberal sports media for wanting to over regulate the game.
- Opines that the nfl is not for libertarians, and that helmet manufacturers like riddell have a demand for more protective head gear. matthew gfeller argues that concussion is functional, not structural.
- Argues that the nfl should lead the way in drawing attention to the strengths and weaknesses of the modern day helmet. the speed and size of pro athletes has made the game more dangerous.
- Opines that restoring safety and sanity to the gridiron can't simply fix the nfl's overlords.
- Opines that the nfl has acknowledged the long-term consequences of concussions and taken first steps toward addressing the problem. the reform movement is desperately need at the lowest levels of the game.
- Opines that the more safer the game is, the less injuries will occur. riddell sports and usa football have partnered to help educate athletes and parents about concussions.
- Opines that the nfl is not for libertarians. the nfl concussion deniers see a "liberal sports media" conspiracy.
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In this essay, the author
- Analyzes how concussions have affected former players' ties in directly with a helmet to helmet hit, an ejection could come in to good use. the former nfl player, mike webster, died from cte in 2002.
- Explains that football is still a rough sport and concussions still occur. an ejection penalty in the nfl could show parents that these hits aren't tolerated.
- Explains that the ncaa implanted a targeting penalty in spring before the past college football season, which led to an ejection and 15 yard loss for the penalized team.
- Explains that nfl players can't always control where a hit lands, which leads to an ejection. however, players are beginning to tackle lower which is another issue in the league.
- Opines that the nfl isn't only concerned about player safety, but fans also care about the game.
- Explains that players intentionally targeting players is risking player’s safety and on the other hand, players accidently hitting players in the head. the love of the game can get to players and fans both.
- Explains that the nfl didn't have a system dedicated to concussions. the nfl settled with the former players for 760 million dollars.
- Explains that the nfl's concussion liability and how players can tackle the problem. judge anita brody denies preliminary approval.
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- Explains that most players just want to get back in the game. the average concussion recovery time is about 1-2 weeks.
- Explains that making equipment safer is one of the biggest improvements that all the football league's want to improve. if the leagues do not change the equipment the players will keep getting concussions.
- Explains the second helmet improvement is two millimeter thick polymer, placed on the inside of the helmet on foam padding.
- Explains that helmets help against skull fractures, soft tissue, and cuts since they enhance headgear. if someone makes the brain stop moving around in the skull, that will be the only way to stop concussion.
- Explains that due to the uprising number of concussions every league is changing its rules especially the nfl.
- Opines that the rule changes in the nfl are a big one because of injuries, but if you change too many rules, the game will not be the same.
- Explains that high school students are more likely to get a concussion than college or pro players because they do not have fully developed brains.
- Explains that high school students get concussions or even injures more because of their equipment. some players don't have enough padding or need more padding to reduce impacts.
- Explains that the nfl has spent $75,000 to fund the center for disease control foundation for their study of concussions and head trauma. roger goodell and his wife present themselves as an advocate and leader in youth sports safety.
- Explains that the center for disease control and prevention reported a 60% increase in emergency room visits related to traumatic brain injuries among athletes under the age of nineteen.
- Explains that for every 1,000 exposures to concussions whether it is at practice or in a game, college players suffer 6.3 instances, and high school athletes suffer 11.2 instances. milewski noted how ironic sports are every yard and tackle is very carefree, but being very strict when tracking something as serious as head injuries.
- Opines that statistics can be inaccurate because athletes don't report their injuries. college and high school students need to do a better job reporting injuries to be safer.
- Opines that if you change to many rules the game will not be as fun for some fans than others.
- Explains that athletes get concussions from hard impacts from hitting or getting tackled. athletes have many symptoms that coaching staff and parents can spot right away.
- Explains that the leagues are improving helmets with guardin caps and polymers. if the equipment changes the feeling of the helmet, players will not want to wear it. a concussion alters the way your brain functions.
- Explains that the nfl is changing rules that deal with head like targeting, and leading with the head, with a huge uproar as the kick off.
- Opines that high school students get more concussions than college or professionals, and younger players get them because they don't have proper equipment.
- Explains that statistics for football leagues are a big deal for fans. in 2001 there were 150,000 athletes that were injured at the age of nineteen and younger.
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In this essay, the author
- Opines that football is not something to be "indulged" in by its players, for its risks on health far outweigh its benefits on glory.
- Analyzes how dr. bennet omalu, an erudite medical examiner, learned the truth of the nfl's ruthlessness the hard way.
- Explains that the nfl's artifice did not end at its striking racism towards omalu. when dr. ann mckee, a neuropathologist, was asked to join boston university’s research team to look into the impact of football injuries on the brain, it reigned with sexism.
- Opines that the nfl has a responsibility to current players and former players to help with their health care.
- Opines that if they were a parent, they would not allow their child to play football or another contact sport that could cause brain damage.
- Opines that "league of denial" has opened their eyes to the disturbing truth that society has kept hidden from them.
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In this essay, the author
- Opines that the nfl must change the way they handle concussion injuries and any retired players with cte to save their reputation and health.
- Explains that the nfl has been sound asleep on trying to steer clear of concussions in their players by funding research to obtain more information about them.
- Explains that the nfl could force players to use gear that helps cushion impacts to the head, like a new helmet. the nfl has to kick start the research and adopt new anti-concussion technology.
- Opines that the nfl should be extremely cautious with already concussed players, as they don't want to inflict lifelong brain damage.
- Argues that the nfl should promote the field of medical marijuana and allow cte-diagnosed players to use it.
- Argues that the sooner a cte diagnosis is found, the better scientists will be able to understand it and find ways to help retired nfl players.
- Argues that the nfl is better off canceling the pro bowl and putting that money into something important, like cte research.
- Opines that the national football league is the league that could kick-start the concussion and cte problem. the staple of all contact sports, american football, will soon be in dire jeopardy if the nfl continues to do nothing about solving the issue.
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In this essay, the author
- Explains that the number of concussions in professional and amateur football has been rising and has sparked much controversy in recent years.
- Explains the definition of a concussion in the nfl and how it affects professional athletes as well as amateur or youth football players.
- Explains that chronic traumatic encephalopathy, or cte, is a degenerative disease of the brain linked to symptoms of dementia and depression.
- Opines that the nfl and many private researchers are set on finding a way to conquer this issue. they want to stop these concussions from happening and prevent the diseases resulting from them.
- Explains that many private companies and researchers have taken the issue of concussions head on.
- Explains that the nfl has increased research on concussions throughout the 21st century.
- Explains that the nfl has long denied that concussions have any long-term effects. they argued that mtbi was a sham committee that "glorified the violence of the game."
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