Persuasive Essay On Foster Care

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When a child is put in adoptive care, they would expect to get adopted. But when prices for a kid go for as much as a car, foster care systems can be overcrowded and traumatic to kids. Every year over 428,000 kids have to be given up for adoption in just the U.S alone. But when only 135,000 get adopted overcrowding can become an issue. So how come there so many kids not getting adopted every year. Well, when prices are raised as much as double a car, many kids can be uncared for and forgotten by families that do what them but can’t have them. Families who do spend that type of money for the kids, get put in thousands of dollars in debt, and that could potentially ruin a family. But a lot of family don’t have the money, so when 293,000 kids get left in foster care systems they can become hectic and traumatizing. …show more content…

Many people have come out saying that living in foster care was crowded, gross, and traumatic. People have also said that living in a group home stuff gets stolen, things get broken, people would often wear each others clothes because nobody knows who’s stuff belongs to who, and contrary to belief, they don't get many donations, especially if there foster care is small known, so everything comes in bad condition. Many kids who don't come out adopted have long term issues with feeling unwanted and out of place. Ways that we could cut down on the amount of kids and makes life better for kids in foster care is to have less kids. But the only way that would happen is if more get

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