Personal Narrative: Three Shots

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Three Shots “Pssst, how far out is he?” I whispered. “I’m not sure... But you're good to shoot when you're ready!” My brother responded anxiously. The whole time this buck was coming in, every inch, every foot I started to shake more. That is called Buck Fever. My brother and I sat, and walked miles for a decent deer like this one. Finally he crept over to us little by little. “Shoot Chris shoot!” Aj whispered loudly to me.
A big pause of silence peared over me after he had cried that out to me. BOOM! “Did I get him?’’ I announced. “No Shoot again!” My brother said furiously.
Boom! I was feeling anger with myself knowing the day before I was shooting a straight dead on.
“How about now?’’ I announced loudly.
“Again!” my brother Screamed! …show more content…

The last shot I took seemed more real than any shot I have ever taken. I felt as if I were in the middle of a war scene. It felt like forever until the gun bullet made it over to the deer. The deer had been shot and I fell back on my back thinking I missed as it ran, but finally it dropped a hundred yards later. I was so happy, also releafed. I jumped up and started cheering with my brother, not knowing that I was gonna screw other hunters up.
“You got him! Nice shot man! You did amazing on it,” my brother congratulated me.
“Thank you so so much, there is no way I could have done this alone!” I responded.
“We have a problem...” I asked

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