Personal Narrative: The Cabin

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The Cabin
The low deep bone chilling howl of the wind was brutally pounding my back, as I walked through the deep blood stained snow that looked as if a bucket of red paint had exploded in a room with white walls. My left thigh had a large long gash running from my hip down to my knee, dark red blood ran the nile river down to my sock. Every step I took I could feel the the puddle of blood had has build up in the toe of my shoe. It seemed as if I had been walking for miles and miles but i was barely 400m from the cabin that I had so many pleasant memories in. Through the dim headlights of my old snowmobile that was on the very last leg of its life, I could see my parents cabin. I have been coming here every christmas since I was just …show more content…

Me, my brother and parents are the only ones that have ever been here and it is a 8 hour ride from the closet town. BAM! I hear a loud noise that had to of come from the cabin, I sprint through the thick snow as fast as I can to the cabin to investigate the noise. The front door of the cabin is ever so slightly cracked open. Using my foot I slowly push the door and with a slow settle squeaking sound of the old hinges. I peep my head inside but all I can see is darkness. Thinking in my head that there is nothing inside I take a few steps into the cabin, a strong cold gust of wind slams the door shut and I am left in absolute darkness. The sound of a pitch fork being dragged on the ground was coming from upstairs with a constant thud of someone walking. I shuffle to the closet wall I can find and I run my hands along the wall as I walk until I find the stairs that lead to the second story of the cabin. Step by step I make my way up the stairs as the floorboards squeak underneath me. At the top of the stairs there is a long hallway that my brothers room is at the end of. The light of the moon pierces through the …show more content…

I can see the light of the lamp inside his room leaking out the bottom of the door, it made it look as if there was a fire raging on the other side. Walking down the long hall I can hear the faint sound of someone who seems to be placing back and forth in my brothers room. I get to the door and I twist the gold handle but the door was locked, I kept trying to twist it but the door would not open. I could hear footsteps scrambling around in the room. I hit the door with my shoulder and it busts open, but I stood there in the room alone looking around thinking I would find someone hiding. I hear a sound come from the closet, I go over the the door and put my head up the cold wood of the closet door to see if i could hear anything, I hear slow steady breathing. My heart is beating so fast i think it is going come out of my chest as I wrap my hand over the door knob and swing the door open as fast as I can to find snow jackets hanging in the closet.I let out a large sigh of relief and I turn around to see my brother standing in front of my wiht a large cleaver in his right hand and a rusty old pitchfork in the other, I stand there

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