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In the essay, “Move over Boys, Make Room in the Crease,” the author, Sarah Maratta, explains the bias against women’s involvement in sports. Maratta states the claim that women should be treated as equal in their aspirations to be involved in sports. Maratta grew up her entire life loving sports; in particular, she was quite fond of hockey. In this essay, we find out that not only does she have a passion for the icy and mostly Canadian sport, but that she has a desire to see women treated fairly in all aspects of the sporting world. While discussing the flaws and ill-treatments of women in the sports industry and society, she conveys a sense of urgency in making sports completely unbiased toward gender and about the true love of the games.
At a young age, the author experienced hockey for the first time. Maratta was fourteen years old and fascinated by the players. She loved how they had so much intensity and a desire to win. At first, she didn’t know what to make of the fighting she saw in hockey, but she quickly grew to accept it and even enjoy the fighting. She began to enjoy hockey so much that she watched the sport on a regular basis.
Maratta instantly became a fan of the Columbus Blue Jackets. She attended games and even bought Blue Jacket apparel. Hockey became her main hobby. She watched it, she played it, and she even denoted herself as a diehard fan. But Sarah eventually realized that there was somewhat of a problem with her and her new found love.

Because Maratta was a girl, there were complications with her liking hockey. She explored the fact that some people disliked the idea of girls being involved in sports. She understood that some thought that sports were meant for men, and that women should not be involved...

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...We exploit and demine them. Women are capable athletes and there is a market for women’s sports. There isn’t a good reason why women should be excluded from be involved in any aspect of sports. Women can be just as valuable and contributive to the sporting industry as men.
Sarah Maratta is a remarkable woman who has experienced the evils of sexism in sports. It’s not fair that women have to be subjected to prejudicial stereotypes and circumstances. Women should be given equal opportunities in everything. There should be no bias against them.
Women should be given every opportunity to earn a job or a position, whether it is sports related or not. I am a supporter of Maratta’s idea that there are no partial movements in equality for women. Women should be given a fair chance not just in sports, but also in life. When it comes to equality, there is no substitute.

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