My Argumentative Synthesis Essay

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I decided to revise my argumentative synthesis essay first because this essay just required a lot of attention as I was mostly excited about fixing this essay completely. I started out by deleting and rewriting both of my main body paragraphs. The reason for this was because unlike my first and third essay I had not put any effort into the essay itself as i had a really difficult time writing this particular essay. In more detail it was my first time using sources to the fullest which ended up being more of a challenge than i thought it would. Overall i ended up failing as a writer and ended up rewriting what the sources had to say and i failed in putting it into my own words thus plagiarizing became the heart of the problem so deleting the …show more content…

This paragraph mostly focused on the health benefits that coffee provided. As my third essay required a ton of scientific research this ended up being the easiest paragraph to rewrite. Just like the previous paragraph i deleted all of the plagiarism and ended up rewriting everything in my own words. I wrote specific details in biological context on how coffee benefits our health and body. The knowledge i had gained from writing my informative argument was of big help as i ended up knowing more about this topic than the last time thus i wrote a lot more content. I focused mostly on how coffee can help prevent the risk of type II diabetes and how coffee energizes a person. For example for this body paragraph I provided a lot more detail in the effects coffee has on people stating how caffeine shuts down the chemical in our bodies known as adenosine. Adenosine is a chemical which acts to calm our bodies down which is the reasoning why our bodies feel tired midday. Adenosine is requesting your body to rest. What caffeine does is shut down and prevents adenosine from entering your body and has the opposite effect as it keeps your nerve cells fully active and it keeps your brain fully alert and focused. I also provided scientific articles that backed up my claims, further proving how coffee can reduce the risk of type II diabetes and liver cancer by 50%. I added some quotes from the articles to make this paragraph more

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