Free Indirect Discourse In Katherine Mansfield's The Garden Party

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The short story has invariably become regarded as a conservative form of literature given its often rigid, and basic plot dimensions focused on narrow plot and character development. However, with different writers come different experimentations within the short story. This is especially true with the modernism movement in mind. One modernist writer in particular, Katherine Mansfield, was indeed conscious of the possibilities that existed within the form of the short story as is evidenced in The Garden Party and Other Stories, Mansfield’s most prolific collection of short stories. Just as James Joyce sought to innovate the long-standing traditions of the novel, Katherine Mansfield placed her efforts in revolutionizing the short story. Such …show more content…

What separates free indirect discourse from stream of consciousness is the use of the third person narrator, who becomes more prevalent in the mode of free indirect discourse along with the shifting of personal pronouns. As Josefina Pereyra writes in her essay on Mansfield’s short story, “In the case of free indirect discourse, the technique oscillates between narrative comment and character’s consciousness, in this way the author gains access into the characters thoughts in a third person reproduced monologue.” While the effects of this mode of writing are technical, free indirect discourse helps deliver a form of immediacy that had not been seen in writing prior to Mansfield’s work. The most prominent example of free indirect discourse comes as Constantia and Josephine recall their previous encounter with their nephew Cyril. The instance of free indirect discourse first appears as Mansfield writes, “Josephine made no reply. She had flown off on one of her tangents. She had suddenly thought of Cyril. Wasn’t it more usual for the only grandson to have the watch…” (9). The usage of this mode continues throughout the next two chapters as the two women recall their encounter with Cyril as they pestered their nephew about his father’s fondness for meringues. As opposed to solely relying on the thoughts of a character, here, the status of the narrator is exploited to reach into the thoughts of the two characters as well as using dialogue to fully flush out the scene’s nature. Although this entire scene is devoted to a seemingly minimal plot point, through the use of free indirect discourse, Mansfield successfully portrays the outward tension of the two sisters juxtaposed against their most intimate

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