Intelligence Triumphs Beauty

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I am writing in response to the editor’s request that I analyze and make a recommendation for or against publication in The Shorthorn over Raina Kelley’s “Beauty is Defined, and Not By You.” After analyzing the rhetorical aspects of this piece, I have come to the conclusion that the idea of woman being pressured to fit societies standard of “beauty” will hit home with many Shorthorn readers, therefore it should be published. The main target audience in this case is women, but nearly all UTA community can relate to this article in a certain way. After reading this women or men will develop a different perspective on beauty and self-appreciation. Beauty isn’t what will allow you to succeed; it is the amount of hard work and dedication that you give to accomplish your goals. Kelley gives three main reasons to support this claim; the standard will change, the opportunities for women are growing without the help of beauty, and that it is important to not let yourself get to a vulnerable state. The reasons may seem a little vague but the author gives enough evidence to support them, which gives the reader the opportunity to develop a new meaning of beauty. For the last reason Kelley is presenting an argumentative idea that contradicts what she has said, but still ties in with what she has to say about the “standard”. For the first reason the author states that the beauty standard will change, but what does society consider being the “standard”. Currently in this culture “namely white, young, thing with long, straight hair” is the definition of beautiful. According to a research done by Newsweek, the workplace values looks over education, so most people are at a disadvantage. The author proves this research to be wrong when she describ... ... middle of paper ... ... everyone deals with the same problems. Kelley’s use of pathos is not represented well, if readers really pay attention to what she is saying they will feel emotion, but there isn’t anything major that would actually cause the reader to express feeling. Raina Kelley’s article has enough evidence and personal experiences that it makes it easy for readers to relate and keep reading. Even though this isn’t a topic that most people would be interested in, it definitely is worth reading. I believe it should be published in The Shorthorn because there are enough reasons that the girls of the UTA community can take into consideration. Kelley will make women come to the realization that intelligence triumphs beauty. As the author states, “when I’m on my deathbed, I hope to be smiling in satisfaction about all I accomplished, not that I made it to 102 without any cellulite.”
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