Hunting Narrative

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It was a great day. The sun was shining and there was the cool autumn breeze, giving the reminder that winter was just around the corner. The leaves on the trees were so beautiful, with all of their bright colors, as they fell down and painted the earth. Buck season had just begun, and James was so pumped. It was his absolute favorite time of the year. Hunting was his passion and he couldn’t picture his life without it, especially since the mysterious disappearance of his mother a few years ago. It, in fact, helped him cope with her loss. James had been hunting for as long as he could remember with his dad and grandfather; way before his mom even died. He loved them very much, but never really got to hang out with much because they were …show more content…

They got up in their tree stands and were up there for a few hours, when James suddenly heard some rustling in the trees. He looked down, his binoculars moving right in the direction he heard the noise from, as he tried to make out what it was. He couldn’t believe his eyes. There it was, a big, beautiful buck. From what he could see, it was a least a 10-point. He was so excited he brought out his Remington 30-06 and scoped it in on the deer. He relaxed and breathed in slowly and out right as pulled the trigger, just as his dad taught him. All of the sudden, the buck jerked its head down, as if it sensed his presence. Bam! The gun went off, as the bullet soared right over the buck’s head. No luck. The deer then ran away and back behind the …show more content…

“Was this really happening? Am I just dreaming a horrible dream now?” he thought. He tried pinching himself, hoping to wake up from this terrible nightmare, but no luck. This was definitely real and happening now. There was no escape. James continued to run and pulled out his rifle, expecting his dad or grandfather to come out from anywhere. All of the sudden, his grandfather came out of nowhere, charging towards him. It was almost inhuman. Before James could think he pulled the trigger. Bam! The rifle went off and his grandfather dropped, dead. He couldn’t believe what he just had done. He had no time to waste though if he was going to survive. He was lost now, way off the original trail he followed to get here. If only he could find his way back to the truck and get the heck out of here. James ran on when all of the sudden his dad came out of the brush and tackled him; a predator desperate to kill his prey. James struggled, he tried to go for his gun, but it fell off when his dad tackled him. Then, he remembered the knife he put in his pocket early. He grabbed it and then stared into his father’s eyes. He couldn’t believe that this was actually happening to him. He was in shock. Just as his father was about to go in for the kill, James stabbed him, over and over. Until all that remained was silence and a pile of blood around him. His father was dead, what was he going to do? Then, he stared over his body and wept. He wept

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