How Does Poe Create Suspense In The Pit And The Pendulum

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Suspense in a story is one of the most important parts of the work. Suspense gets the reader hooked to that story and hungry for more. Anticipating what will happen next. Waiting and waiting for either a good outcome or bad. Edgar Allan Poe is a genius with suspense and in his story "The Pit and the Pendulum" and the poem "Annabel Lee", he creates suspense by using an unreliable narrator, imagery, and diction. Using these three elements, he builds suspense in the reader causing the reader to want to read on and see what comes next. Poe builds suspense in The Pit in the Pendulum by using an unreliable narrator when he says,"It might have been half an hour, perhaps even an hour, (for I could take but imperfect note of time) before I again cast my eyes upward," (269). This clearly shows that the narrator is unreliable because even he does not know how much time has passed and the fear of the unknown creates suspense in the reader. Along with the unreliable narrator in "The Pit and the Pendulum", Poe also uses an unreliable narrator in "Annabel Lee". This can be seen when the narrator says, "With a love that the winged seraphs of Heaven coveted her and me. And this was the …show more content…

In “The Pit and the Pendulum” the narrator recites,"Down- Steadily down it crept," (270). He then goes on to repeat the word “down” at the beginning of the next few paragraphs. Every time the word is repeated it is intended to build suspense and emphasize the next “down” even more than the last. It causes the reader to read faster and with more emotion building suspense. Additionally, in “Annabel Lee” Poe also uses diction to create suspense when the speaker says,"That the wind came out of the cloud by night, chilling and killing my Annabel Lee,” (Line 28-29). The word choices of "chilling and killing" creates suspense in the reader and manifests an erie feeling because it causes the reader to experience a chilling

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