How Does Blais Build Internal Tension In Mad Shadows

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In this passage of Mad Shadows, Blais highlights Louise’s transition from being a perfect doll to being a damaged one because of her desire to satisfy only her physical appetite. Louise begins to realize that she is losing the beauty which she worships and the vessel of sexual pleasure who satisfies her body. Using vivid language to describe Louise’s growing internal tension, the narrator makes it evident that Louise’s physical satisfaction is short-lived. This tension also foreshadows her inevitable downfall at the end of the novel, where she loses her life, her mirrors and each of her material possessions. Firstly, within this passage, Louise’s internal tension grows as she notices her physical deterioration. The narrator seems to become mindfully …show more content…

They say, “The blemish on her cheek was like a welt on a leper, a sinister patch which threatened to destroy her. She covered it with cream but the cream turned purple.” In describing Louise with so much disgust, the narrator makes it evident that they feel an undying hatred towards her. Before this point, Louise’s exterior appears to be flawless, with skin covered in layers of makeup to conceal her imperfections, and the world around her is intimidated by the beauty of her and Patrice. However, nothing, not even cream, can hide these flaws anymore. The narrator describes Louise’s blemish as a disgusting monster – something so real and alive that she must do everything in her power to destroy it before it destroys her. The simile, “[…] like a welt on a leper,” is extremely powerful because for centuries, lepers have been dehumanized because their characteristic conditions are disgusting to most people. For the narrator to describe the singular blemish on Louise’s face as something so monstrous expresses how ugly it truly is. The feeling of insecurity inspired by her blemish is alien to Louise; she has never felt it nor has she ever

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