Descriptive Essay: My First Surprise Party

analytical Essay
1114 words
1114 words

I am the one in the picture with the sloppy bun in my hair and the bright red cheeks. The one who can't stop smiling. With all my friends surrounding me, it was one of the best days of my life. All fifteen of us look happy; it was a night for many smiles. Everyone is crowded around the table. There are a lot of red cheeks in the picture; the room was as hot as a sauna. There was a strong smell of barbeque sauce in the air as well. The picture was taken right after dinner. The table we are crowded around is messy. There are a lot of cups on the table and bottles of ketchup and barbeque sauce, with dirty, green napkins piled up. The restaurant was as noisy as the circus when the clowns perform.

There were a lot of pictures taken that night, but out of all the pictures, this is the best one taken of everyone. Crouched down in front is Brent Dana. He has a grin on his face more than a smile. Brent hates pictures, and he doesn't smile in any of them; he is wearing his red "Rag Tails" shirt that he always wears. Next to Brent is Jade Walker. She has her hair back and is wearing her red "North Face" jacket. Jade has an adorable smile on her face. Next to Jade is Mary Attaway leaning over the table wearing a flowered backless shirt with a black sweater. To the right of Mary is Laura Jones. Laura is slightly leaning her head toward her right shoulder and is wearing a blue shirt with a drawstring tie in front. Laura has her arm around Erica Farnsworth, who has a yellow shirt and white jacket on. She looks especially happy; she is smiling from ear to ear.

Starting in the left hand comer (in row two) are Chad Phillips and Caitlin Pollock standing together. Chad has his arms around Caitlin's waist. He has this cute little grin, and Caitlin has a huge smile and rosy red cheeks. Brittany Wilkins is next to Caitlin with a puzzled look on her face, the face you would see in a hard Algebra II exam when you don't think you even learned what the question is asking.

In this essay, the author

  • Narrates how they were crowded around a table with sloppy hair and bright red cheeks. the room was hot and smelled of barbeque sauce.
  • Analyzes how brent dana, jade walker, mary attaway, laura jones, erica farnsworth, and laura are the best pictures taken of everyone.
  • Analyzes how chad phillips and caitlin pollock stand together, while brittany wilkins is next to her with a puzzled look on her face.
  • Narrates how they sat in the grass watching the freshman baseball game, but couldn't figure out why everyone kept talking off to the side.
  • Narrates how they were pretty disappointed that day because it was friday and they weren't doing much that night. they decided to go out to eat with their sister, her boyfriend, parker, and their friend, laura jones.
  • Recounts how they had to wait with laura jones at the fieldhouse for lauren to pick them up. laura ran over to grab their face to tell them to rent scary movies.
  • Narrates how lauren and parker picked them up and decided to eat at sticky fingers.
  • Describes how they were shocked when four people walked in and yelled "surprise!" when they turned the corner.
  • Narrates how the secret of the party was almost blown.
  • Opines that this picture captures the excitement of their first surprise party. it was a perfect night, and they are so glad that they have this wonderful picture to reflect on the fun they had.
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