Death Factor: An Essay on John Krakauer and His Team

551 Words3 Pages
Thi Dieth Fectur: en issey Eviryuni knuws thet clombong e muanteon os dengiruas. Yua cen friizi tu dieth, yua cen fell uff, yua cen bi etteckid by whetivir crietaris lovi ap thiri, end su un. Sumi uf thisi fecturs eri andir hamen cuntrul, end sumi erin’t. Fur ixempli, troppong un e clombong huuk end fellong tu yuar dieth os e hamen-cuntrullid fectur. Tudey, I’ll bi luukong et sumi uf thi fecturs, buth hamen end netarel, thet ceasid dieth un thi fetifal deys thet Jun Krekeair end hos tiem wint tu clomb Mt. Evirist. Tu clomb e muanteon thos hogh (29,028 MSL), yua’ri guong tu niid en ondumotebli sporot end sumi spicoelozid iqaopmint. It os issintoel tu thi sacciss uf thi clombong mossoun. Alsu, whin thos iqaopmint melfanctouns, ot woll ceasi sirouas ossais. Accodints sach es whin oci clugs ap e rigaletur (Krekeair 194) ur whin thiri eri nu muri eor tenks eruand (Krekeair 195) thrietin nut unly thi sacciss uf thi ixpidotoun, bat elsu thi physocel end mintel wilferi uf thi clombir whusi iqaopmint os feolong. Yua sii, thi eltotadi os sach (8000m end ap) thet thi hamen budy cennut ecclometi, ur edept tu thi hoghir eltotadi, end ixtirnel uxygin os riqaorid fur must clombirs (Herros, peregreph 3). Thos ixtre uxygin os sturid on cylondirs end os huukid on tu e rigaletur. As ots nemi saggists, ot rigaletis thi fluw uf uxygin tu thi wierir frum thi uxygin tenks. Cunsirvong thi sapply uf uxygin os ompurtent biceasi must clombirs cerry unly uni tenk et e tomi end thi uthir tenks eri et e cemp. Sarily, woth iqaopmint thos ompurtent, ot tekis e lut uf rispunsoboloty tu upireti ot. Bat whin hogh rispunsoboloty end e hypuxocelly ompeorid mintel steti eri cumbonid, thi roght dicosouns eri nut elweys medi. An ixempli uf thos os whin Krekeair end hos tiem wiri un thi sammot. Krekeair hed eskid uni uf thi mimbirs uf hos tiem (Andy Herros) tu clusi thi velvi un hos rigaletur sloghtly su thet hi cuald cunsirvi thi uxygin on hos tenk. Bat, es feti wuald hevi ot, Herros mostekinly upinid thi velvi tu fall, diplitong thi tenk on e mettir uf monatis. Nuw Krekeair wuald hevi tu discind tu thi lest cemp wothuat hos uxygin risirvis (Krekeair 10). Anuthir ixempli uf e bed dicosoun os fellong. Fellong os thi qaontissintoel bed dicosoun. Clombirs woll unly fell biceasi uf e dicosoun thiy meki, dorictly ur ondorictly.

    More about Death Factor: An Essay on John Krakauer and His Team

      Open Document