Creative Writing: Thunderstruck

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Thunderstruck It was the first hot and humid day of July this month, so my friends Craig Verflixt, Kenny McCarthy, and myself decided that it was a great day to take a bike ride on the Adirondack Mountain path. Although I like to go bike riding, I haven’t had the time to go lately, and had no one to go with. Since it was the beginning of summer, school had ended, and I could go ride with my two best friends. We all lived in upstate New York outside of Buffalo. Kenny and Craig lived a few blocks away from me. I remembered my mom telling us to bring our GPS and all have our cell phones in case of an emergency. Now, I am glad we did bring our devices. At the mountain path The wind punched me in the gut as though I had just offended it. …show more content…

At the present time, a few drops of rain hit my face but I thought nothing of it at the moment. “This is great!” Craig replied as he peddled by my side. Craig is the goofy kid that can get you annoyed but at the same time can cheer you up, and he makes a great friend. In contrast, my other friend Kenny is a polar opposite. He is always serious, brave, and hopeful, and the two were my best friends for exactly those …show more content…

Luckily, we were staying in a camping store. We set up a camping stove from a propane tank and cooked baked beans for dinner. The manager let us raid the snack aisle, and we grabbed pork rinds, chocolate and trail mix for dessert. It was starting to be a pretty cool night! It was really pleasant to be warm and dry after being drenched in the rain. We could hear the wind howl outside but knew we were safe inside the store. “I would drive you all home, but it’s too dangerous out there”, the manager said looking out the window, interrupting the silence. “That’s ok. It is pretty rough out there, and we’re having a pretty good time in here”, I replied. By then we learned his name was Franklin Rickard and we started to become good friends that night. He told us stories of his camping and hiking expeditions around the US, and told us that he hiked the Adirondack trail with his wife some 15 years ago. Not to mention, it took them 5 months and two pairs of hiking boots each. The next morning, the connection was back on as presumed, and we called our parents. Of course they were worried sick about us and immediately came to pick us up. In a matter of minutes, they were there to pick us up and to bring us home. “That goodness you are ok, honey!” My mom exclaimed, “We were so worried about you and your friends. Under those circumstances, I am so glad you are all

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